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What man of you, having a hundred sheep, if he loses one of them, does not leave the ninety-nine in the wilderness, and go after the one which is lost until he finds it?
And when he has found it, he lays it on his shoulders, rejoicing.
And when he comes home, he calls together his friends and neighbors, saying to them, ‘Rejoice with me, for I have found my sheep which was lost!’
I say to you that likewise there will be more joy in heaven over one sinner who repents than over ninety-nine just persons who need no repentance. (Luke 15:4-7)
But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. (Romans 5:8)
But God, who is rich in mercy, because of His great love with which He loved us,
even when we were dead in trespasses, made us a live together with Christ....
For by grace you have been saved through faith, and that not of yourselves; it is the gift of God, not of works, lest anyone should boast. (Ephesians 2:4-5,8-9)
I am that stray sheep that the Shepherd sought and found. I am that sinner that Christ died for, now forgiven and redeemed by Him, and claimed as His own.
I love poetry and I like to try my hand at it. I’m here to learn and to get as much constructive criticism as possible. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented on my work; it means so very much to me. It's always encouraging to find new reviews on my pieces- whether they bring good news or bad
because it means someone cared enough to lend a hand.
Hoping to improve!
Hannah
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What man of you, having a hundred sheep, if he loses one of them, does not leave the ninety-nine in the wilderness, and go after the one which is lost until he finds it?
And when he has found it, he lays it on his shoulders, rejoicing.
And when he comes home, he calls together his friends and neighbors, saying to them, ‘Rejoice with me, for I have found my sheep which was lost!’
I say to you that likewise there will be more joy in heaven over one sinner who repents than over ninety-nine just persons who need no repentance. (Luke 15:4-7)
But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. (Romans 5:8)
But God, who is rich in mercy, because of His great love with which He loved us,
even when we were dead in trespasses, made us a live together with Christ....
For by grace you have been saved through faith, and that not of yourselves; it is the gift of God, not of works, lest anyone should boast. (Ephesians 2:4-5,8-9)
I am that stray sheep that the Shepherd sought and found. I am that sinner that Christ died for, now forgiven and redeemed by Him, and claimed as His own.
I love poetry and I like to try my hand at it. I’m here to learn and to get as much constructive criticism as possible. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented on my work; it means so very much to me. It's always encouraging to find new reviews on my pieces- whether they bring good news or bad
because it means someone cared enough to lend a hand. Hoping to improve!
Hannah
Please sign my guest book!
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since May 2, 2007.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 290 comments.
- I am a 23 year old woman (United States)

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- I have 290 comments, 1 contest
My Poetry
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Slender, silver almond trees
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The first time I went to the open air market here in town it was with two neighbor ladies, Dolores and Mercedes. I was new in town and we didn’t know each other very well, but they took me under their wings and made it their539 lines, 7 comments, November 1. In <600 words. Reward
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This is my bunny. Her name is Button, because we think she’s as cute as a button. She 1
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The first time I went to the open air market here in town it was with two neighbor ladies, Dolores and Mercedes. I was new in town and we didn’t know each other very well, but they took me under their wings and made it their - Button at storywrite
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CelticQueen : I just love it when I find a fellow believer! on November 25I haven't read your writing yet, but I'm getting ready to just that. In the meantime, it's so good to meet one who believes as I do - that Jesus Christ is Lord and Lord of all. It's good to meet you!
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LongPatrol on October 5Hi! I hope that you're having fun on this site. I know that I am, and while you're on, it's even better!
I love your poems. So far, my favorite poem of yours in the Whismical March. I'm not sure what a silver almond tree is, but I love the poem!
Keep writing and keep in touch!
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Animals on August 13Hello, I have read all your comments and you write such beautiful things. You are a very nice person. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poetry because I need lots of helpful criticism and Allpoetry needs more people like you.
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madmaddy on July 17please come and rate my new poems
