Fragile Soul
You and I are alike
breakable and sensitive
craving to be understood
but equally as fearful.
I beg you to forgive me
should I open the wound
that so devastated -
my shell - a deceptive cover,
my heart, shattered in your weeping.
should you need me and
and it appears I close you out,
please pray for a solo moment
of rescue and recovery anyway.
a miracle of ‘us’ that
rips out of human boundary
strikes the Saviour’s fancy
and exalts His glorious will.
My poetry may not impress everyone, but much of it will find its way to help develop a reader's third eye, the one that seeks a change and pre-empts complacency. I hope you find the ardent weaver in at least one of them.
Dear Readers!
I was privileged to have written the forward for
Myra Lochner's 3rd book ( "WINS Verlies.Gained Loss" ) of collected bi-lingual poetry (English and Africaan) with the theme of healing, hope, and encouragement. (One of my poems is also included. )
Myra is a lovely Christian woman, author -producer, publisist, edopathist (creator of a newly developed process of inner healing), social worker and meta-therapist. You can read about her in our internet community of writers.
http://allpoetry.com/myrataal
Are you writing a book? Do you want someone to write the prologue or forward to introduce you and your work in a way that you as the author wouldn't? I will consider if you ask.
Private message me so we can discuss it.
Thank you for reading.
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About My Critiquing
As a courtesy to those who need a
viewpoint or two from readers, critiquing
is an important ingredient for improvement,
not so much in the way your sacred thoughts
could be written, (as each style has its comfort
zone), but for the clarity of readability.
If you're serious about quality
writing, I owe it to you as a fellow poet!
Once you hear from me in a greeting and check out my page, please let me know what kind of critiquing you expect:
(Level one-General comments and critiques which mildly approach the general pragmatics of improving the overall body.
Level Two-General and specific comments that are diplomatically giving a more intense suggestion and/or rewrite. Sometimes they are reviewed on a line-by-line. Ask me only if you aren't overly sensitive and your ego isn't in the front line. Thank you for your trust(
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My dear art-angel-- you and your Mother hang the moon for me
- Last seen 2 hours ago. Member since January 21, 2002.
- I'm a rain & tears poet for 10465 comments.
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, and quote is Me...me and my BIG ideas!. - I am a 59 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Writer/Music & Teacher of the Word/Apologetics Research, local member of Midwest Writer's Guild, playing music and wondering if there is still water on the Moon. .
- Visit my homepage at www.midwestwg.com/
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- I have 10465 comments, 11 contests, 3 addlines, 5 columns
My Lists
- An Indesputable
Truth that Includes Yet Exceeds Us ( Not For Heated Debate) - Articles (Columns)
- Children's
- Duettes and Other of My own Forms
- Favorite Writers and Suggested Reads
- Greeting Type Poetry
- Honorable and Unplanned Collaboratio
ns With Awesome Writers - Huh's?: 'By any other name is still... a Huh?
- Life In Reflection-Free and Blank Verse
- My Blue Room ( Early Compositions & Reflective Pieces For Teenagers)
- Nature
- Personal Bio Front Page(Including Unboring Tidbits n' Quotes)
- Poetry and Articles About Poetry... and Their Articles! ::O
- Publications
- Sassyfras Collection (Humor)
- Spiritual & Inspirational
- Syndicated
My Poetry
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my fingers carve your eyes
on the sidewalk of obsession15 lines, 6 comments, July 21 -
John Petrucci's "Tunnel Vision"
you can't stop a miracle23 lines, 3 comments, July 21 -
If you’re not beautiful
You’ll have music to make it so
My Stories
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"A family death during a teenager's life exposes the grief, strategy, and a turn of events. A surprising twist ensues."1065 lines, 18 comments, July 28, 2007. In 600-2000 words, Childrens
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Millie beggingly came forth
bombarding a way through a void -
"Life has its surprises when more than 50 years following World War II, a man's demise becomes
miraculously changed at long last."
My other items
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- Massacre In Gray at sharepoetry
Madness lived in snow caps / where in trenches lie a man's / mortar- salted heart; / livid pain matched the / gray cap of expenditure / / its oozing red seam would please / the enemy distraught; so much so / that they grazed the fatigu - Child Made Whole at sharepoetry
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Sprite on July 5Thinking of you and the sweetness of your heart. Love you. Hope all is well. Joyce
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Because I can
