Hmm... well lets see, Im 20 years old. I live in Minnesota and have had a hard time with life.
This past October some disturbing things have happened and decided to write again. I don't plan on being a professional writer or anything. This is just my way of relieving pain and stress and what not. Therefore, lay off the grammer corrections and if i have spelling errors..I can see that.
Now if you feel the urge to correct every little mistake my poem has..go ahead perhaps i will do the same and return eh?
Anywho, go ahead and read em' and hopefully you'll think some of them have some "potential".
yes, maybe a little girls rape and girls broken heart..has some potential in this writing world.
well, enjoy and I hope I didn't scare you too much! ^.^
peace n' love
ash
This past October some disturbing things have happened and decided to write again. I don't plan on being a professional writer or anything. This is just my way of relieving pain and stress and what not. Therefore, lay off the grammer corrections and if i have spelling errors..I can see that.
Now if you feel the urge to correct every little mistake my poem has..go ahead perhaps i will do the same and return eh?
Anywho, go ahead and read em' and hopefully you'll think some of them have some "potential".
yes, maybe a little girls rape and girls broken heart..has some potential in this writing world.
well, enjoy and I hope I didn't scare you too much! ^.^
peace n' love
ash
- Last seen on Dec 1 2:45 PM. Member since May 28, 2004.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 222 comments.
- I am a 20 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
- Visit my homepage at crazysmitherz/myspace.com
- I am in the groups A Cyber Cafe for the In Love Looking and Broken Hearted
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I made a mistake by choosing a guy over my friends...now i pay for it..only my sister had to pay as well..she didn't deserve it..Just wish23 lines, 1 comment, May 14
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ju9rey23 on April 29, 2005thanks ashley, i'll call if i ever need to, you are back in rosemount right??, or did you leave, im so lost, but yeah, the same to you, you can call if you ever need to 763-218-2725.
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Hayzeskyz on February 9, 2005Ash- I love and i miss u like crazzy..when can i come visit u? i wish u were here..tomorrows my b-day...and ur not here..call me.. u should come down to Rosemount and visit us..were all very bored without you...--luv always..Danielle!! aka..Hayzeskyz
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takemebeyond on September 12, 2004thanks for that comment. I wasn't really like that girl in the poem, but sometimes i wanted to be. I'll read some of your stuff.
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eeee, sorry about the tears, but thanks for the comment.
i'll read some of yours ^_^
<33 Kayla
