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I'm an infrequent writer, not too much time for it. I'm still hoping to get better, though, please leave comments on the work that I do post! I can't get better if i'm not criticized!

"God is dead." -Nietzsche / "Nietzsche is dead." -God

"Green Eyes"

Honey you are a rock
Upon which I stand
And I come here to talk
I hope you understand

The green eyes
Yeah the spotlight
Shines upon you

And how could
Anybody
Deny you

I came here with a load
And it feels so much lighter
Now I met you

Honey you should know
That I could never go on
Without you

Green eyes

Honey you are the sea
Upon which I float
And I came here to talk
I think you should know

That green eyes
You're the one that I wanted to find
And anyone who tried to deny you,
Must be out of their mind

Because I came here with a load
And it feels so much lighter
since I met you

And honey you should know,
That I could never go on
Without you

Green eyes, green eyes, ohohoh...

Honey you are a rock
Upon which I stand.

--Lyrics by Coldplay


(<3 yoshi~)

  • Last seen on Sep 12 7:53 PM 2006. Member since March 14, 2004.
  • I'm a citrine experience poet for 162 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "DOH!".
  • I am a 16 year old guy (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
  • I have 162 comments, 1 column

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  • [I couldn't put this into a poem to convey what I wanted to say, so I went ahead and put it in story form instead]
    So, I went ahead and got back from camp a couple days ago.
    890 lines, 1 comment, May 9, 2004. In <200 lines, Other

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  • RedLipsAndTattoos on April 26, 2005
    i love you
  • RedLipsAndTattoos on October 30, 2004
    !!!!!!
  • Jay Is Magic on September 4, 2004
    He could be gay, but then again he could also be a fairy princess from outer space sent down to feed generations to come with poetry that many regard as boring now.
  • Jay Is Magic on September 4, 2004
    And I know not any french.

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