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Heyy
I’m Erica
I’m 16
I have brown hair
And brown eyes
I look very ordinary...

I don't smoke.
Don't do drugs.
Very rarely drink.
Some say I'm a good girl, I just say I hate peer pressure and don't like to give in. I do what I want, not what others want.
Because the people who matter don't care and the people who care don't matter.

I guess it goes without saying that I love poetry, why else would I have an account here? Everyone says pretty much the same thing on here, but I can’t express who I am really in this much room, it would take me days to write enough so you MIGHT be able to understand me, so I’m just gonna write a little bit to help you get started...

My favourite poem was written for me by one of my bestest friends
Tears with you all the time,
Creep up on you when you’re down,
Tissues hopes you’ll always be mine,
Bcos in tears I don’t want to drown.
Yep yep yep, best poem

I'm pretty shy around people I don't know, but once I get to know you I can be incredibly random and often don't shut up.... But when I know someone needs to talk about something I'm good at just listening and letting them get everything out....
I like to think I'm generally a nice person but sometimes I can get extremely jealous and it seems to get in the way of my kindness....
I don't really know how to explain myself, so I'm just going to leave it here and if you want you can send me a message or read some of my poetry to get to know me....

[♥]I love music, I know everyone says that but it’s true, my fave bands atm are:
[♥]Masterplan/Jorn Lande
[♥]Breaking Benjamin
[♥]Rise Against
[♥]Theory of a Deadman
[♥]Secondhand Serenade
[♥]Finger 11
[♥]12 Stones
[♥]Default
[♥]Eve 6
[♥]Three Days Grace
[♥]Teddy Geiger
[♥]Plane White T's
[♥]Red
[♥]Mayday Parade
[♥]Kisschasy
[♥]Boys Like Girls
[♥]Skillet
[♥]Sugarcult
[♥]And so many more....


[♥]My favourite movies:
[♥]A Cinderella Story!
[♥]High School Musical
[♥]A Walk to Remember
[♥]10 Things I Hate About You
[♥]P.S. I Love You
[♥]Pretty much all chick flicks, disney movies and kids movies

[♥]Favourite TV Shows:
[♥]Home&Away
[♥]Gilmore Girls
[♥]Heroes
[♥]Gossip Girl





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Quotes:
***Isn't it amazing how someone can break your heart and you can still love them with all the broken pieces?***

*** Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah I'm smiling, but inside I'm dying***

*** I like to pretend everything's all right, because when everybody else thinks you're fine, sometimes you forget for a while that you're not***

***EVERY time she laughs, she hopes he is watching... not so he will see she is happy but so maybe, just maybe, he will fall for her smile as hard as she fell for his***

***What do you do when the only one who can dry your tears is the one that made you cry???***

***The worst way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside them knowing you can't have them...***

***She just wants to dream away, sick and tired of the games that people play***

***Easy to find what's wrong, harder to find what's right***

***I love walking in the rain, cos no one can tell I'm crying***

***If I can't hear your heartbeat you're too far away***

***I'll just pretend to hug you until you get here***

***Teddies don't hug back but sometimes they're all you've got***

***Even heaven is hell without you...***

***Love is when you don't go to sleep because reality is better than a dream***

***Before you criticize someone walk a mile in their shoes, that way when you criticize them you’ll be a mile away and you’ll have their shoes***

***A best friend is one who can look at you with the biggest smile on your face AND STILL KNOW THAT SOMETHING IS WRONG***

***I smiled at you but you turned away and kissed her, how could you do that when yesterday you said you loved me with all your heart!?***

***Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're gonna get***





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I want to improve my poetry, if you read this and then read my poetry PLEASE leave a comment, not just "wow, good job with this" but please tell me any ways you think I could improve my poetry. I came onto this site to improve, and I'm doing everything I can to do that, I just ask you other great poets to help me become a great poet.
I want constructive criticism not just "this poem is crap" If you think my poem is crap please tell me why because I really do want to improve.
Thankyou for taking the time to read this and hopefully taking the time to comment my poems.
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