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I am not the best writer out there, but I appreciate the fact that people can come on my page and comment. I do however think as I keep writing I am getting better. Constructive critism is welcomed, but if your going to be a b*tch about it and say my work sucks then don't bother to comment because thats just plain rude. If you comment on any of my poems or stories I will be sure to comment on one of yours. I also would like to say that while I do enjoy entering contests I never enter with the intention to win so if I do win I consider that a plus. Thanks for checking out my page.

Poems I'm focused on

  • Biting my fingers I wait in anticipation Not knowing what to expect, but expecting
    11 lines, 8 comments, June 19

My Poetry

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  • Eyes staring at me like im a stone
    Realizing that I will be left alone
    42 lines, 6 comments, August 4
  • Beauty is skin deep
    Loneliness is in my soul
    7 lines, 8 comments, July 29
  • Your porceline skin use to mesmorize me
    Now as I see the boils spread im disgusted
    36 lines, 4 comments, July 28
  • Everything inside my heart despises you
    As you sit there hollow taunting us with your words
    38 lines, 7 comments, July 25

My Stories

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Guest Book

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  • Velvet Rose Petals on September 3
    thank you so much!!
  • Natelystious on August 4
    Thank you for the compliments
  • Fading Memory on July 11, 2005
    Hey, its no problem at all commenting. As far as always knowing what to say.. I get lucky sometimes. I do kinda have Myspace.. I made one but haven't uploaded any pics or anything yet. My name on there is by my other e-mail address, nirvanahsb@yahoo.com. I looked at your Myspace and its too R rated. and nobody ever said R rated was bad lol. Talk to you later.

    -Larry
  • mozarts funeral on May 13, 2005
    I'm in love with buffy and angel

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