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Carpe-x-Diem
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In the event of my demise
When my heart can beat no more
I hope I die for a principle
Or a belief that I had lived for
I will die before my time
Because I feel the shadow's depth
So much I wanted to accomplish
Before I reached my death
I have come to grips with the possibility
And wiped the last tear from my eyes
I loved all who were positive
In the event of my demise.
In The Event Of My Demise, Tupac Shakur
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Carry on my wayward, son,
There'll be peace when you are done.
Lay your weary head to rest,
Don't you cry no more.
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- I'm Jes.
- Yeah, I pretty much rock.
- I like every kind of music.
- I like Metal, Rock, SOME Rap, Jazz, R&B, 40's...you name it, I like it.
- I'm pretty damn religous.
- I love Martial Arts.
- I'm training for my black belt.
- I'm very patient and forgiving.
- Metallica is better than you will ever be.
- I love reading.
- My favorite book is, The Catcher In The Rye by J.D. Salinger.
- I don't believe in love at first sight.
- I do, however, believe in lust at first sight.
- I love my family.
- Music can make me laugh, cry, and angry.
- I'm a virgin -- and proud of it.
- I don't drink.
- I'm generally a nice guy.
- I rock at Tony Hawk's Pro Skater. Case closed.
- I'm a Red Sox fan.
- I don't sleep much.
- If you can find a type of music I don't like, I'll give you $1,000.
- I love my friends like family.
- Jazz is almost as cool as Metallica.
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Some pretty fricken sweet quotes.
"My imperfections and failures are as much a blessing from God as my successes and my talents, and i lay them both at His feet"
-Ghandi
"Whether it is big or small, many or few, repay hatred with virtue."
- Lau Tzu
"He with no opinions is seldom wrong."
- Unknown
"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference."
- Elie Wiesel
[After seeing some very ironic profiles]"The more people I meet, the more I like my cat."
- Lauren Saunders
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My favorite song in the world is, "To Live Is To Die" by Metallica.
"When a man lies
He murders some part of the world
These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,
All this I cannot bear to witness any longer
Cannot the kingdom of salvation take me home?"
-Cliff Burton
Cliff Burton died in a tour bus crash in 1986. May he rest in peace.
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Pull Harder On The Strings Of Your Martyr
The face, and the lips, tremble, as it rips,
Your breath, quickening, as heat, rushes in,
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings
Clawing, the skin, each kill, your weakness,
Annihilation, your masturbation-, tyrant i'll burn you down
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
My hands grip your throat, I need your end,
Burned, staked, ripped apart- I avenge
For every life you have taken
I am here to repay, You ask me oh God why?
You ask me oh God why,
For every life you have taken
I am here to repay, You ask me oh God why?
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings.
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END THE GEONCIDE IN DARFUR! You can make a difference. Over 400,000 people have been killed in the Darfur region of Sudan by their own government. IN 1945, the UN said that, "Never again" would they allow a genocide to happen. The Sudaneese government is making a mockery of that promise. It's time for change. It's time to make the world a better place! Stay informed, and don't give up hope that you can change the world!
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(\ /)
(O.o)
(> >)
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paste mr bunny on your page and help him take over the world...hahahahaha
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Ok everyone. I want to explain to you all what my opinion of a good poem is. As you can tell, I'm quite honest when I critique. So here's my idea of a good poem:
A good poem is a poem that needs not be annotated. A good poem will let the reader relate, even if the reader has never experienced what the poet is talking about. A good poem is one that, even if it's long, the reader will love just as much as a short one, and continue reading. A good poem let's the reader find out what you're feeling through the tone of the poem - not by just straight out saying how you feel. A good poem takes the reader away to a far away place where the poem takes place, and when they're done reading it, they want to go back.
Most importantly, a good poem feels good to write. A good poem will let the writer completley pour their emotions out onto the paper. A good poem is a soul made of ink.
Carpe-x-Diem
----------
In the event of my demise
When my heart can beat no more
I hope I die for a principle
Or a belief that I had lived for
I will die before my time
Because I feel the shadow's depth
So much I wanted to accomplish
Before I reached my death
I have come to grips with the possibility
And wiped the last tear from my eyes
I loved all who were positive
In the event of my demise.
In The Event Of My Demise, Tupac Shakur
----------
Carry on my wayward, son,
There'll be peace when you are done.
Lay your weary head to rest,
Don't you cry no more.
----------
- I'm Jes.
- Yeah, I pretty much rock.
- I like every kind of music.
- I like Metal, Rock, SOME Rap, Jazz, R&B, 40's...you name it, I like it.
- I'm pretty damn religous.
- I love Martial Arts.
- I'm training for my black belt.
- I'm very patient and forgiving.
- Metallica is better than you will ever be.
- I love reading.
- My favorite book is, The Catcher In The Rye by J.D. Salinger.
- I don't believe in love at first sight.
- I do, however, believe in lust at first sight.
- I love my family.
- Music can make me laugh, cry, and angry.
- I'm a virgin -- and proud of it.
- I don't drink.
- I'm generally a nice guy.
- I rock at Tony Hawk's Pro Skater. Case closed.
- I'm a Red Sox fan.
- I don't sleep much.
- If you can find a type of music I don't like, I'll give you $1,000.
- I love my friends like family.
- Jazz is almost as cool as Metallica.
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Some pretty fricken sweet quotes.
"My imperfections and failures are as much a blessing from God as my successes and my talents, and i lay them both at His feet"
-Ghandi
"Whether it is big or small, many or few, repay hatred with virtue."
- Lau Tzu
"He with no opinions is seldom wrong."
- Unknown
"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference."
- Elie Wiesel
[After seeing some very ironic profiles]"The more people I meet, the more I like my cat."
- Lauren Saunders
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
My favorite song in the world is, "To Live Is To Die" by Metallica.
"When a man lies
He murders some part of the world
These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,
All this I cannot bear to witness any longer
Cannot the kingdom of salvation take me home?"
-Cliff Burton
Cliff Burton died in a tour bus crash in 1986. May he rest in peace.
---------------------------------------------
Pull Harder On The Strings Of Your Martyr
The face, and the lips, tremble, as it rips,
Your breath, quickening, as heat, rushes in,
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings
Clawing, the skin, each kill, your weakness,
Annihilation, your masturbation-, tyrant i'll burn you down
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
My hands grip your throat, I need your end,
Burned, staked, ripped apart- I avenge
For every life you have taken
I am here to repay, You ask me oh God why?
You ask me oh God why,
For every life you have taken
I am here to repay, You ask me oh God why?
Pull, harder, strings, martyr,
Stop, you cry, that’s, a lie,
Flush, gasping, white, reddening,
You smile, and destroy it-, it's time that we end this!
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings,
It's our curse, that makes this world so hopeless,
Allowing, our king to spread his genocidal wings.
--------------------------------------------------
END THE GEONCIDE IN DARFUR! You can make a difference. Over 400,000 people have been killed in the Darfur region of Sudan by their own government. IN 1945, the UN said that, "Never again" would they allow a genocide to happen. The Sudaneese government is making a mockery of that promise. It's time for change. It's time to make the world a better place! Stay informed, and don't give up hope that you can change the world!
--------------------------------------------------
(\ /)
(O.o)
(> >)
/_|_\
paste mr bunny on your page and help him take over the world...hahahahaha
---------------------------------------------------
Ok everyone. I want to explain to you all what my opinion of a good poem is. As you can tell, I'm quite honest when I critique. So here's my idea of a good poem:
A good poem is a poem that needs not be annotated. A good poem will let the reader relate, even if the reader has never experienced what the poet is talking about. A good poem is one that, even if it's long, the reader will love just as much as a short one, and continue reading. A good poem let's the reader find out what you're feeling through the tone of the poem - not by just straight out saying how you feel. A good poem takes the reader away to a far away place where the poem takes place, and when they're done reading it, they want to go back.
Most importantly, a good poem feels good to write. A good poem will let the writer completley pour their emotions out onto the paper. A good poem is a soul made of ink.
- Last seen 10 hours ago. Member since November 8, 2004.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 480 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Pluto is too a planet!".
- I am a 17 year old guy from Virginia (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/xxdisturbedxx
- I am in the groups A Brush With Christ, All Metal
- I have 480 comments, 4 contests, 3 columns
My Poetry
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Her face became shrouded from the second hand smoke,
And the filtered omniscient moonlight shined upon her elegant and arcane features.5 lines, July 22 -
I pity you because of your faith in me,
Despite my superb skills in the realm of failure,11 lines, 1 comment, June 4 -
Two doors converge at an odd angle, Someplace deep inside my mind.15 lines, 3 comments, May 19
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We'll sing heavy metal songs of love [this love] while flying across the dark side of the moon. She'll listen to Motörhead, Machine Head, and screams of the undead;11 lines, 2 comments, April 21
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Days melt into weeks, the weeks bind together into months. Before you know it, yesterday was long ago, you can barely remember it. The challenges you conquered and the vices you fell to will all rise again, testing your will106 lines, 1 comment, November 2, 2007. In <600 words
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"I guess this is good-bye, then." / "I suppose. Remember, you're still like a brother to me. Nothing an change that. I just, can't have the temptation in my life right now," responded the solemn voice in the receiver.232 lines, September 29, 2007. In <600 words
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It was time. We all knew it. We heard the explosions, the bullets, screams...it was our time to go. Before we jumped, Chris took me to the
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- Column: The Iraqi War at allpoetry
My reasoning about why the Iraqi war is neccecary and we need to stick with it.
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Demonic Kitten on February 25dude
ur page
FAILS
u can't read it
oh, and i hate u
haha! ur hated
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Striders Bar - : Visit on May 1, 2007Just dropped by to see your profile page, 'cause of a comment you left on another authors poem. I like your profile page and some of the poetry, and sayings you have on it.
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WishMeAway--x : hey on February 25, 2007yeah, it totally sucks doesn't it.
I hate having to deal with it at school cause everyone asks how you're doing and all you can do is give them this look and snap at them. At least for me. =}
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WishMeAway--x : Hey! on January 1, 2007I will have to check that story out! It sounds pretty good!
I really liked your poem a lot! I've been writing poems off of pictures lately...I never thought to write one off a short story though!
Grea job, Jes!
