SOHR-oo-ka
Sorcha is the proud tilt of her head.
Sorcha is her regal bearing.
Sorcha is the aristocracy running through her veins.
Sorcha is a lady.
Sorcha is the fierceness of its Gaelic ancestry.
Sorcha is the caressing whisper of its beginning,
The dipping awe in its middle,
And the exclamation of its end.
Sorcha is the shining of her eyes.
Sorcha is the brightness of her soul.
Sorcha is the misty isles themselves.
Sorcha is the gentle curve of her shape.
Sorcha is the soft gold in her hair.
Sorcha is the strength of her being.
Sorcha is Sarah.
Sorcha...is me.
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I'm going into my freshman year of college, and I'm very excited for the opportunity to enhance my skills and make new friends. Thank you to all of you, my friends, for your support and critique of my writing!
Sorcha is the proud tilt of her head.
Sorcha is her regal bearing.
Sorcha is the aristocracy running through her veins.
Sorcha is a lady.
Sorcha is the fierceness of its Gaelic ancestry.
Sorcha is the caressing whisper of its beginning,
The dipping awe in its middle,
And the exclamation of its end.
Sorcha is the shining of her eyes.
Sorcha is the brightness of her soul.
Sorcha is the misty isles themselves.
Sorcha is the gentle curve of her shape.
Sorcha is the soft gold in her hair.
Sorcha is the strength of her being.
Sorcha is Sarah.
Sorcha...is me.
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And now that you've read the poem, go comment on it!

I'm going into my freshman year of college, and I'm very excited for the opportunity to enhance my skills and make new friends. Thank you to all of you, my friends, for your support and critique of my writing!
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ThunderMontage on October 22hey you commented on my poem real truth.
can you check it again to see if its better?
