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Who Are You??? For BIG POINTS :)

 Will Be Judged Soon For All Who Keep Asking! I'm back and I'm reading them all! Just been a tad busy!

Soon!!

Dragonfly40 (my real life Mom) and I decided to have a contest to learn about everyone on AP.  We thought about what kind of contest... word bank, pictures, funny, rhyming, free verse, etc. etc. etc. BUT

We decided we wanted to just find out who you really are! So....
We are offering big points for real life poetry about you. Just give us something about yourself - be it amazing, funny, sad, whatever. Entertain us and let us into your life through poetry...


Please make it real (you can tell when things are made up usually - at least my Mom can!).

And we must add the usual:
1. No sTiCKy CAPs
2. No religious bashing please
3. No erotica period
4. No using the word 'the' (just kidding)
5. Please put the term 'Patent Pending is an awesome group' in your author's notes to verify that you have read the rules.
6. 10-100 lines. No more, no less.

 

Overall, just have a great time and help us get to know you better.

 

DF

&

-GP

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 23, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 2000, Silver: 1200, Bronze: 800, Honorable mention: 12 people
  • Final notes:
    So sorry it took so long to judge - my dad had a dirtbike wreck (ICU). I had more HMs to give, but a few people dropped out and more didn't follow the rules about putting "patent pending is an awesome group" in the author's notes. Overall, there were a lot of great entries and the decisions were HARD. Thanks for entering and patiently waiting. Congrats to the winners!

Contest Winners

  1. I'm nothing that I cannot be / and everything I can / When I walk I take a wayward step / towards forbidden land / / There is nothing that
    by BabyBun 25 lines, 11 comments, on May 4 4:22 AM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. by AprilAdoration 35 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 5:01 PM 2007. In Life, Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I always dreamed
    of being something,
    by Akarian 29 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 1:21 AM 2007. In thoughts, personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. who am i?
    i'm the kind of girl
    by Wind of Darkness 22 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 5:58 PM 2007. In Other, Personal, Weird
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by Double o7 57 lines, 4 comments, on May 3 2:54 PM 2007. In Personal, Contest
    Honorable winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. ~*~
    by Walking In pAiN 56 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 30 7:05 PM 2007. In Life, Other, Personal, Thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  7. Who am I?
    Dare I ask?
    by WillowPrincess 77 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 19 12:59 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, My life, Thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. I’ve picked some cotton, fought a war,
    did some jumping out of planes.
    by Beret55 85 lines, 6 comments, on May 4 3:33 PM 2007. In Life
    Honorable winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  9. Mirror mirror on the wall
    by pen-inhand 22 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 17 9:44 PM 2007. In Personal
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. First poem I've written that didn't rhyme.
    by aboomer 37 lines, 39 comments, on Apr 18 6:38 AM 2007. In life, sad, pain, personal, thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. by Hiddenspaces 16 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 17 5:45 PM 2007. In Other
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. i forgot my memorie back home..
    who am i?
    by Domine Pestilentia 19 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 6:21 PM 2007. In Humor, Dark, Personal
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  13. Anata-no namae wa? is what is your name
    by DazzledByYou 32 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 18 3:31 PM 2007. In Weird
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [74]

1 - 74 of 74
  • a myriad of colors
    cap my busy head.
    by Medea 40 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 17 6:43 PM 2007. In Personal, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by B Chandler 18 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 6:15 PM 2007. In Personal, Childrens, Society, Thoughts, Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by SoldierOfTheCross 20 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 5:23 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Who am I?
    I am the wind,
    by rainbowgirlie900 19 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 17 5:35 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Hope, Life, Lyrics, Other, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by magneticblue 0 lines, on Apr 17 5:53 PM 2007. In Life
    • Viewed by judge.
  • A girlfriend full of laughter
    A friend before and after.
    by Autumns Soul 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 5:39 PM 2007. In I, Me
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I dont want to run,
    Makes me a coward,
    by XxXxSilentXxXx 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 18 3:21 PM 2007. In Personal., Contest, Self, Freewrite, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You want to know who I am, and where I stand
    Ok So be it I'll let you in my friend
    by J-Lee18m 24 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 5:24 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The sun slowly set over the water
    Breaking up the light
    by Lone Wolfling 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 5:26 PM 2007. In Sad, Life, Love, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Who am I?
    by StephMFP 38 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 5:41 PM 2007. In Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lyrics written on my ripped blue jeans,
    Music playing in my mind without an end,
    by iamthebeatles 13 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 17 6:54 PM 2007. In Personal, Weird, My own style
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Ryno 36 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 19 8:27 AM 2007. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge.
  • all about me ~*~*~*~*~
    by xdrwningxstarx 39 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 17 5:59 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There isn't muct to say,
    about my life today.
    by x-Suicidal--Love-x 21 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 6:16 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • When you try your best ;
    but you don't succeed
    by -StainedBlue- 12 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 10:47 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Pain, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lost in a sea of people
    I am stick at the back
    by lovelight05 32 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 18 4:31 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Peel away the layers and you might see / What remains of the person I'm supposed to be / I was born with many talents and beauty this is tr
    by XxGoldenxXDawnxX 13 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 27 4:58 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I want to go play baseball / I want to ride my scooter / I want to play some marbles / for I am quite the shooter / / But Dad say's Son not yet / you've got a lawn to mow / do it just the way I taught you / n
    by Juzjon 28 lines, on May 3 3:08 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • As I sit here thinking all about / Life in general and how at times I've / Loved it and totally hated it. / / All I tend to remember is th
    by A Murderous Lament 16 lines, on May 4 7:21 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Hmm.. Who Am I? / / I'm the canvas you paint on, / The lined paper for your ink, / The voicebox you talk through, / I'm the one that makes
    by Onionducks 38 lines, 22 comments, on May 4 5:12 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I look in the mirror and what do I see / Well that's easy I just see me / My facial expressions glow / Tanned skin, the color of cookie dough / Eyes like almonds, hazel in color / I guess I'm just like every other
    by Abidoodle333 29 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 4:11 PM 2007. In Me, Other
    • Viewed by judge.
  • To understand a man like me, / Would take a tower of 300 feet. / / At first you shudder, / But then a mutter, / "Just walk inside" and nay else uttered. / / Walking through, a heart so true, / A gloomy ghas
    by Scott0 71 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 2:56 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • i'm a cutter
    i'm a lover
    by Dirty and Broken 37 lines, on Apr 18 2:56 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Angst, Personal, Sad
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Looking in the mirrored glass
    I see myself looking back at me
    by MelissahhMidnite 27 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 18 9:12 PM 2007. In About Me, Personal, Self, Contest, Lost in thought
    • Viewed by judge.
  • At the age of Eight I wrote my first real poem,
    I mean something I am actually still proud of.
    by SageoMithas 83 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 18 10:52 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Humor, Love, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge.
  • My life is full of pain
    Full of little girls fears
    by allfaith 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 19 9:18 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • / / Who am I, I am someone who / has nightmares but believes in dreams, / / Who am I, I am someone who / laughs and never cries, /
    by fortunatebeing 24 lines, on May 1 2:56 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • > I am lost, lost in dark / > Dark as it can I search for light / > Light in which I try to find what I can be /   / > First I am a
    by abuyi 28 lines, 3 comments, on May 4 3:59 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am a boy / In men’s shoes / A child at heart / A man in body / / I am a pyromaniac / Who knows to build / Large fires that are safe / Taught by the Boy Scouts / / I am a leader / I am a Eagle
    by writer-of -poems 63 lines, on Apr 25 10:10 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • After all the water has cleared out, / and all the damage has been done / What's left? / Who am I? / I am the little girl that was / physically and sexually abused for five years / I am the ten year old who starve
    by frostany 22 lines, on Apr 30 7:32 AM 2007. In personal, life, pain
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Me! Me! Me!
    by giggety 52 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 30 7:53 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Can you see my tears form in black? / Can you see happiness is what I lack? / This is my life by misery it runs / Until my final breath is
    by NickelleteXninja 38 lines, 8 comments, on May 4 9:19 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Fighting / Temptations. / The urges to go against / What i know i
    by MadeleineElysse 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 1:29 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am a sobbing masochist, mourning her affections / I wonder why he’s all I see, why he’s the object of perfection / I hear his evanescent voice whisper through my head / I see his eyes a brilliant green, just before th
    by Casmira 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 3 11:02 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am, and yet I am not. / / Friends and family see me as a / Humor-loving, / Fun-seeking, / Percussion-playing, / Candy-loving, / Curious
    by Jadegreentiger 36 lines, on May 3 4:24 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Society, My life, My own style, Self, Personal.
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Am a girl as little as can be / I like to drink warm cocoa and hot tea / / I'd someday like to be a martial artist / but it's not likely and I'm not the smartest / / I've dreamed about being a soccer player /
    by stupid cupid 20 lines, on May 3 5:09 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am a little post traumatic / an anti-depressant addict / with a history on over thinking...everything / / as for self esteem I don't hav
    by gaiascully 35 lines, 7 comments, on May 4 1:45 AM 2007. In Personal, Life
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am a man with ordinary aspirations / and an ardent lover of beauty and nature / / I don't indulge in false criticism of others / especially when they hurt me unnecessarily / / / I desire to write poetry esp
    by Purush 12 lines, on May 4 7:46 AM 2007. In Life
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Life is lonely / As a child of one / With a parent of one / He used to be my / Everything / My papa, I used to / Pray that I would go to hell / Instead of he / But now / We grow apart / As I prepare to lea
    by AnorexicShadow 15 lines, on May 4 7:59 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Red hair long and thick
    Usually knoted
    In a messy bunch at the back of my head
    by SternBlinkin 97 lines, on May 4 9:20 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • So, for whatever reason, I woke up today / and all I have to say is... / That face in the mirror is the last thing I want to see.. / / Good morning to me.. / / The only captivating thing about me is everythin
    by LoversLostLips 43 lines, on May 4 10:06 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I think of time spent; wasted / Hastily and lazy, we can't erase it / Sugar casings laced with / Images of your face I'm facing / Slowly the days shift phases / Amazed at trails I've been blazing / Save the betray
    by maybememories 56 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 2:31 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • a girl with dirty blonde hair / a girl with a with a broken white smile / a girl with a crushed heart / a girl with a skater look / / this
    by XxStIlLhErExX 27 lines, 2 comments, on May 4 12:58 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Other
    • Viewed by judge.
  • This thing that lurks in the back of your head / The enigma that like to be bleeding not dead / The happy little faerie that likes to make
    by Fesha-x 50 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 1:01 PM 2007. In personal, ME!!
    • Viewed by judge.
  • by ellaelu 41 lines, 4 comments, on May 4 3:55 PM 2007. In Abuse, Sad, Adult, Life, Personal, Other
    • Viewed by judge.
  • There are many different sides of me. / Caregiver is what the world would see. / On the outside I appear dependable and strong. / I have to be just to get along. / Perhaps quiet and sometimes shy
    by sweetie663 27 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 4:45 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • / I am fifteen summers of age, but I’ve seen what’s right and wrong, / I’ve lived fearlessly and stupidly along with my peers, / I’ve loved it all, from the long hot days to the to the cold night sing-along’s, / I ju
    by Macca16 16 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 5:33 PM 2007. In Life, Hope
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Stolen Whispers / I am the city lights / And the echoes that run throughout. / My anachronistic heart / Screams and howls aloud. / / I am the water flowing / And crashing from the sky. / I am the undertow.
    by dirt of grandeur 28 lines, 3 comments, on May 4 8:18 PM 2007. In life, other, personal, thoughts
    • Viewed by judge.
  • I am not beauty, / nor neither beast. / I do not diet, / I love to feast. / I live in comfort / with clutter present. / I try, but I am no
    by InkstarRN 49 lines, 2 comments, on May 4 8:18 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Bottled up inside / Even the people that know me the best / Don't really know me / I've been hiding behind these eyes / And this plastic smile / The brand-name clothes / And the decaying flesh / In
    by Nyabbi 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 4 9:58 PM 2007. In love, emo, dark, me
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Who am I? / People always ask that / To sum up one's self is really hard to do / But as it does seem I am shallow and deep / I am short, but I am tall / The one who always has to be strong / The one who hides away
    by LadyOfFate 23 lines, on May 4 10:22 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Even as I stumble across the floor / I manage to stand up and look for more / / I can never change the past / But one way or another my happiness will last / / My smile is going to go for miles / Through the o
    by DancingShadowCorpse 40 lines, on May 5 12:06 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, Weird
    • Viewed by judge.
  • The quiet girl / living next door / shy of new people / and hesitant of greetings. / / The loud, crazy teenager / who speaks her mind / wh
    by loveisthemoment 39 lines, 1 comment, on May 5 12:19 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.

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  • B Chandler
    April 17, 2007
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    Let me cook dinner and I will return with an entry

  • DazzledByYou
    April 17, 2007
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    no fair cori you already know me, well Whaaa to this contest

  • SecretSafe
    April 18, 2007
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    that's an awesome idea for a contest hope you get many great entries!

  • forever dreaming
    April 18, 2007
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    Damn I just wrote a poem like this for another contest so there's no way I could come up with another so soon, but great idea to gt to know everyone all the same. Wishing you all the best when it comes to the judging. Claire

  • DazzledByYou
    April 18, 2007
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    o.k then i will tell you something u dont know

  • AprilAdoration
    April 27, 2007
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    Ahaha, I know it's a little late
    But I finally got over that block
    Of no inspiration.
    YAY!!!
    Great Idea for a contest!
    I gotta run
    TALENT SHOW
    WOOOOO!

    Love ya! :]

    [[ZombiNa]] ♥

  • Walking In pAiN
    April 30, 2007
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    ooo i'm exited to enter this contest. I'm writing a poem now
    Hopfully the contest doesn't close b4 i get it finished cuz i'm still in school

    ashley


  • Cinnarry gold member
    May 3, 2007
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    okay Bets, how old is the young un before I even THINK about this?

  • AureateCorona
    May 3, 2007
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    LUCY!! You've got some judging to do!! haha... look at all thses wonderful entries! best of luck with your judging... I would enter something but you two already know me so well... i may throw my figurative hat in the ring later today... we'll just have to see... haha

  • NickelleteXninja
    May 4, 2007
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    'Patent Pending is an awesome group'

  • A Murderous Lament
    May 4, 2007
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    ...

    HOLY SHIT POINTS! Lol.
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    May 20, 2007
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    wen are u judging this...
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