Round one of a series of contests I'm plotting 
This is just the qualifier round, so it's open to everyone. Just give me the poem that you feel is your best piece, pre-write or new. Seven people will be invited to the next round of the contest, and more point will be added for each round until the end which will be a veritable treasure.
So give me your best!
~Rules~
1. No cursing or innuendo- kids are on here too
2. No erotica please. Sensuality is fine, but nothing hardcore.
3. If you must utilize dirty-pretty, chatspeak, or sticky caps, use them in moderation.
4. Any form you want to use is absolutely fine.
5. Have fun with it! This is your time to shine and show me what you've got.
Go for it people
Impress me!
<333, Kelly
This is just the qualifier round, so it's open to everyone. Just give me the poem that you feel is your best piece, pre-write or new. Seven people will be invited to the next round of the contest, and more point will be added for each round until the end which will be a veritable treasure.
So give me your best!
~Rules~
1. No cursing or innuendo- kids are on here too
2. No erotica please. Sensuality is fine, but nothing hardcore.
3. If you must utilize dirty-pretty, chatspeak, or sticky caps, use them in moderation.
4. Any form you want to use is absolutely fine.
5. Have fun with it! This is your time to shine and show me what you've got.
Go for it people
Impress me!<333, Kelly
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 30
- Final notes: GREAT JOB everyone I loved so many of these poems, it was hard to decide! Congratulations to the winners, and to the finalists, you can find the next round at: http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2355696
Contest Winners
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Why can I not be / As beautiful as she? / Her face is like an exquisite diamond, / Featured perfectly, with a nose no human could recreate,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Silly little sleepyhead / Rubbed his eyes, climbed out of bed / School, it starts in half an hour / Time to brush his teeth and shower. /by Eternallycurious 34 lines, 10 comments, on May 8 10:29 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Sorrow is no longer the song I sing...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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The limelight has poisoned me
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Tired of all the lies / The drama that spreads like fireflies / Just because of the way I dress / Depressed aleady with more stress / Getting called gay / Everythings mixing becoming grey / Can't stand a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darkness falls on lonely hearts,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Its funny how things get taken for granted, / This precious life, so sweet, so sublime, / So simple, each second just fades away, / Yet allby Onionducks 73 lines, 15 comments, on May 22 1:31 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Society, Gifts, Precious, Personal, Pain, Love, Lyrics, Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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'.'by loveisthemoment 38 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 2 12:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your mind bogged down / everything out of focus / nothing makes sense / anymore. / The dreary day / goes on and on / with no sign / of giving in. / When a mystical sound / fills the senses / waby loveisthemoment 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 12:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A spark to light a thousand fires
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Lurking figures in the sallow airs of the field / Beasts in battlefield brushing leathery suits / Rattling noise blending in the settling dust / Particles dampened by toil-scattered sweat / Rumble-calmed laid, clawed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I called out to you
But you never answeredby MathiasThom 41 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 10:30 PM 2007. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Society, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Upon the cliffs of Azarine / She stooped and glimpsed down / As she stood upon the bluffs / Upon their stormy crown / And stooping on the bluffs / She shuddered as she saw / As she saw the consuming waves• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by myriad-dark 21 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 5 11:33 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Knowing that you love me / But thinking of all the past / Past pain you've caused / And I stand here confused, / Confused of if• Commented on by judge.
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9 / 11 Terrorist Attack / Silver streaking through the air / Screams resound everywhere /by MourningSun 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 2 11:21 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The reason there's been no recent updates is because of this. A new form called 'individualtean'.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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His Lexis and his Mercedes Benz / His mansions and all upon which he depends / His Phd's and social status / His mountain tops and all hisby 2lullabyhaven 66 lines, 83 comments, on Jun 9 9:03 AM 2007
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Fallen angels / Hear my cries• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The invitations had all been sent out
All the garden gnomes were ready to play,<by Poetdontknowit 26 lines, 29 comments, on Sep 25 10:25 AM 2006. In Childrens• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Once upon a time, / There lived a girl / She had a lovely face, / but hid it from the world. / She had a burden to bear, / A secret to keep• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Light no more / To shine through her eyes / Constantly clouded by salted water / Evermore she cries. / The silver, liquid lake / Spread in all its splendor / Holds the power to make her cry / Crawl to her c• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your soulless solace and / disillusioned breathing rhythm / feels like martyr shadows / crawling through the smoggy night / Digging holes tby Hadji Murad 91 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 19 9:19 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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call him up and say goodbye
hang up before you hear him cry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Struggling through one day at a time / Defeating those who offended us with crime / Reading the letters that bring us to tears / Seeing their photos help with the fears / Longing to hear the last words thatby Jayjaythepoet 27 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 18 12:00 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I remember growing up,
back when I was just a boy,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Traveling the world in just one day
On those clouds floating my way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
and the other man• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Sweet hopes / Rest on faulty dreams, / Which sleep on the naive wishes / Of hideous longing.by Aralyn Leighanna 3 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 18 12:42 AM 2007. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How do you love someone? / When all you have been is hurt / each time it hurts more and more / I fell like I've been stabbed in my heart each time / deeper and deeper the knife goes / I don't know how to love / So• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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But I can not touch your soft hands,
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The days come and go, / Emotionless tears fall from my eyes, / The pain in my stomach is like a / Thousands knives, / Twist and turn, / sto• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Fire set ablaze my eyes
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She's just antoher / Ballroom beauty / Breaking down / In the presence of inteligence / Beauty is only so deep / Anything moree && it wouldby Heartbeatsxfading 54 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 2:24 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hush, close your eyes, were alone on the floor,by jesseramsey 15 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 19 2:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Parable of the Weeds / Matt. 13: 24 – 30 / W. Peter Sanci June 21 / 2007 / I chose this particular reading today, because I have been t• Viewed by judge.
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Walking around lost, / Wondering with thousands. / Through shop are people around me, / Looking at me up and down. / I feel devastated by tby XXDarkness-DecayXX 35 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 23 11:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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