This contest is for poets with 10 trophies or less. Please enter something amazing!! I am allowing prewrites but fresh poems would be nice too. Show me emotion, Show me imagery
Rules
No chat lingo
No all caps
No cussing
No cutting or suicide
No dirty pretty I don't understand it as of yet
No bashing God or others, no exceptions!
But most of all have fun
You may use the picture above for inspiration, but you don't have too. Picture by Josephine Wall sorry I did not know who created this beautiful picture, thanks to the person who let me know. Please credit Josephine Wall if you chose to use the picture above. A while back I entered a picture inspired contest and this picture was there with no author posted. Now that I know who it is I want to give credit where credit is due. thanks
Rules
No chat lingo
No all caps
No cussing
No cutting or suicide
No dirty pretty I don't understand it as of yet
No bashing God or others, no exceptions!
But most of all have fun
You may use the picture above for inspiration, but you don't have too. Picture by Josephine Wall sorry I did not know who created this beautiful picture, thanks to the person who let me know. Please credit Josephine Wall if you chose to use the picture above. A while back I entered a picture inspired contest and this picture was there with no author posted. Now that I know who it is I want to give credit where credit is due. thanks
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 23 people
- Final notes: Wow, what a very hard contest to judge. Such wonderful entries from all of you. If you did not win does not mean that I did not like your write, they just did not touch me the way the winners did. I thank you all for entering. I read each and every poem fully and commented on each and gave 3 applauses to each. I don't believe in having a contest and not reading the writes, I don't just view them. Each and everyone of you has amazing talent and I hope you will enter my future contest Congrats to all the winners, honorable mentions are not in any order. Thanks again Theresa
Contest Winners
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For in my darkest hour, / I could not see the light / I may of lost the battle / I’ll never give up the fight / I was full of determinationby kooleyes 32 lines, 59 comments, on Jul 25 8:42 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Love, Life, Thoughts, Personal
Gold trophy winner
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She only has a dollar in her pocket / A treasured find upon the ground / her feet are weary her back aching / Her head thumping with every• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I’m named most holy, your mother / In the garden of Three Trees / I have been dining, none other / At the table of Three Queens / I’ve rais• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I can see you again / You can see me / But I am in a place / That I was never allowed to be. / It's much too beautiful, / It matches your face; / Will you remember me, / In all my evil sin? / Or willby TaintedBeauty 46 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 24 11:43 AM 2007. In Love, Sad, After Death, Weird, Seperation
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Sleep, sleep little darling.
Nothing can harm you.by La Tua Cantante 28 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 23 11:48 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal
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I derive from essence
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The stars of night bring forth your beauty, / Yet hide your angelic light. / They dance around your mourning / For none such a wonderful site. / As this which cannot be solved. / My love for you never to be dissolveby bluefalcon 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 12 9:54 PM 2007
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We are so lucky to be living, / in this world. / God' put us, and everything else, / upon this beautiful earth. / He gave us beauty, and the spice of life' / to behold before our very eyes. / We should pray'by Shirley Shaw 50 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 28 11:22 PM 2007. In Life, Gods' Love, Spiritual, Hope, Faith For The Future, Beautiful-Thoughts.......
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The gray grassed forest gleamed
as you try to surviveby PageTurner 44 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 30 3:40 PM 2007. In Creative, Imagery, Inspirational, Contest.
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Lets fall back / and land among the blooms / Sweet fragrances / tickling the senses / as I lay tightly in your arms / gazing at the sky /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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"Take these words I'm giving
And I'll take you were we are all alone,
Just don't give your heart to mine for it is made of stone"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Shooting Me
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My damaged angel, / with his broken smile, / his saddened heart. / He looks at me through a child's eyes, / his love grows stronger, / and it baffles me. / All thoses years locked away, / a hardened crby WillAlwaysLove 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 9:58 AM 2007. In Love, Life, Personal
Honorable winner
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Tears fall while she sleeps, / for her mind shows her memories, / that her heart refuses to see. / When she wakes she'll push them away, /by Vera Jewel 29 lines, 10 comments, on May 23 6:20 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Other, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
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by Amorous Arms 40 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 29 5:12 AM 2007
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Waterfall in my waking / trinkling streams of serenity / Like a dream. / Moon in the depths of my imagination / Awesome and soul-filling / Bold and surreal. / Pyramids afar, just out of reach / tempting journeysby BringintheSunshine 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 28 10:55 PM 2007. In Contest, Fantasy, Thoughts, Nature, Personal
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As I'm walking home from school, / I'm looking down at the ground angrily, / not even paying attention to the storm brewing around me. / Alby Clear-Cut Crystal 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 18 9:20 PM 2007. In Fun, relieved
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Alone she stands; an image of despair
On the brink of her demise,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The sun will never rise on this blood stained Edan. / Winged guardians have had their wings snipped, / And their spear tips broken. / A deafening silence has fallen on paradise's choir. / Shades of grayby TheSilentArtisan 90 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 4:22 PM 2007. In Personal, Fantasy, Hope
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [43]
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I am waiting so desperately, / For the cyber-punk post-nuclear world of tomorrow. / Where science fiction is non-fiction. / Something tells• Commented on by judge.
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the night saw galaxies: so profound / the splendid communities of light / opened onto prisms of slight decay / at the edges of world's wondby EverxEnding 11 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 11:48 PM 2007
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I have won the war from within / I have nothing left to stand. / My hands battered, rough like fish skin / My legs heavy, feeling caught in quicksand. / Yet I stand like being pulled up by strings / from the one who• Commented on by judge.
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Mom you left me, / You left me that day. / Fragile baby girl, / I could'nt talk, so you did'nt know what I wanted to say. / You walked out• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sometimes I lay awake at night, wondering if it's still worth the fight / Thinking of the light of day leaves me with nothing but a sigh, b• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The storm of virtue alarms the youth's sentimental dreams.
The nerve of liberty advances to break the raging waves of chains.by Beanbiscuit 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 5:31 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He was always so happy
this dreamer of mineby dream5111 21 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 25 12:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Attention and esteem the ambition / But it was never enough for you / Truth exposed, the desperation set in / A choice made to play a veryby Glasyalabolas 46 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 20 7:46 PM 2007. In Personal, My own style, Anger, Warning, Headgames, Hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I had the dream again last night,
Of the river of red,by BrokenDawn 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 7 8:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My Loves caress; / Grinding knuckles into soft dough, / My loves caress, / Hands kneading the warm and the wet, / Rising within me my heat• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Crows in the field, / dance around a decaying maid, / as she moans and lists / from scarecrow to scarechild / cleaning their dirty hands, and faces. / Branches in her hair / tied to stay with blood & ribbons,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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we are too far along, / to say we dont belong, / we are too strong now, / to hate each other now / positive is what we only need, / not all• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm living my life as a movie
Trying to look as good as I canby Just Mandiiee Now.. 35 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 25 7:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
YOUR HANDS / suprise me / the same thing / you clench when you're angry / you use to envelope / mine / that for once / looks so tiny / within yours / suprisingly soft / like a cushion for my knuckles andby Zeeky 30 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 30 12:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Though if you always felt frozen,
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The rain is cold, / Harsh, like black velvet, / -hopeless / The temple curtain is torn, / Lost, like dying dampened embers, /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks for all the entries I will be commenting on more soon. Have a great day And good luck to all
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