Serial killer minds, and dark morbid writers gather!!~!
What I want:
Sick, twisted, murder, torture, to feel the pain of the victim, i want you to divulge into your minds and pull out those dark thoughts of hate towards your enemy pen me on how you want to kill them, get revenge? just be creative for me, kill them in your own ways, don't be boring and say "oh I knifed him with this kitchen knife" I want serious sick stuff here!! hehe
I am allowing prewrites in this contest, enter all you like, I love these types of write, Enter as many times as you like...
I want imagery and make me shiver! make me feel the knife slicing into my arm as you do to your victim...
Warning: This is a Type of poetry, not actual killers, so please do not judge these writers or myself it is just writing, not actually something I'm sure anybody here on ap does...
Entertain me, show me this style of writing has not died in its decade!
Rules:
No chat speak, cussing is allowed though
Must be longer then 6 lines, but can be as long as you like as long as its over 6 lines
Must be spell checked and read through for grammar errors
have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 24
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 9 people
- Final notes: Thanks to all who entered gee this was one of my hardest contests to judge you all did so well, thank you for proving to me that sick and twisted writes are on allpoetry, you all wrote wonderfully but the final 12 were the poems that really spoke to me and made my blood run cold! and your all winners in your own way for i liked your poems in each and individual poems:
So in first place is:
The silver Quill: With Inundated Mutialtion -- Parts 1 to 5
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4468507
This poem just blew me away and rendered me speechless. Congrats
Silver goes to:
Timespell: with Posh Bit Of Nosh(EXTEME ADULT CONTENT)
This is just sick, wrong and erotic and murdurous all in one and wow hun congrats its perfect in it own ways.
Bronze goes to:
Synthetic-Nightmare: with Twisted(EXTREME CONTENT , ADULT, MAY BE OFFENSIVE)
You never amaze me with how sick your mind can really get, thanks for entering this and it was a much deserved trophie.
And the honourable mentions in no perticular order are:
Symphony In Blood
by Xianaria
Bloody Mess
by Immortally Yours
Partners In Crime - A Story To Be Told
Morbid Erotica!
by Immortally Yours
Medicene Man
by PerfectDrugLolita-x
The Birth of the Syndrome of Stockholm.
by Ophiophiliac
"Hitchhiker...(EXTREME ADULT CONTENT)
by Timespell
Kiss of Death (Graphic)
by Immortal Obscurity
A Dream Of Revenge
by Edna Sweetlove
One Little Lie.
by SaintSorrow
you all did amazing and caught my attention in individual ways with each different poem i applaud you all for your poems you all did amazing thank you for entering!
Love Vampy aka Kitty aka Lost Vampyre Angel!
Contest Winners
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I lower you to the bed, reaching for your thighs
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Morbid Erotica!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I'll have you stand very, very still
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by Immortal Obscurity 46 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 18 6:39 PM. In Adult, Dark, Graphic, Disturbing, Serial killer, Weird
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I prefer the word artist instead of murderer or crazy pychopathic killer I'm an artist but without the pastals, the paints, etc.• Commented on by judge.
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Hello there
to you underneath the thick ice.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Disrupt the violence fetish for the whores,
they miss their prosthetic pricks bathed in virgin juices.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How can I ever forget you
i dream of you nightlyby tombruize 41 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 25 8:58 PM• Commented on by judge. -
He whispered words of sweet seduction,
filled with more words of beautiful
regret that snowballed hatredby Amythest Moonjade 39 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 29 10:44 PM 2006. In Critical, Dark, Death, Contemporay• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I woke on the moor, bound hand and foot,
Wrapped with the flimsy tulle and a black dahlia.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Knots, you're bound in a sticky situation,• Commented on by judge.
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-Shot- / I just shot someone in the head / I don't know why / But it was what I was told to do / -Choke- / I just hung someone by the neckby JinxyCat 40 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 12 6:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Silenced by the succumbedby JinxyCat 6 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 30 11:10 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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continual disappointment and abuse, your suffering, I do not regretby Amythest Moonjade 11 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 18 4:07 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Some people are jerks Like my brother and his friendsby bobbysanchez321 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 9 10:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by PerfectionIsPoison 8 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 25 9:04 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There he treads on unpaved ground / Hounding for a kill, not understanding why.. / But knowing is all-powerful! / That's what mama always replied / Seeing their phobias fall from their eyes / As th• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Vibrant, meaty flesh licks flesh, like carcasses that were never fresh,by Brit-Girl 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 26 5:17 PM. In Dark, Lost love, Hate, Contemporary, Insane, Killer, Revenge, Metaphorical• Commented on by judge.
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She sat there in loneliness waiting for the clock to strike twelve
Sick and tired of everything going on in her worldby TyrannyForestFairy 26 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 9 9:18 AM. In Contest, Dark, Death, Sad, Abuse, Teen issues, Horror, Cannibalism, Murder• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Into the mind of the kill....
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This is what I am, a monster.
I crave you in front of me swooning,by rubyvaroom 16 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 26 2:37 AM. In Sexual Sensum, Hate, Death, Pain, Dark, Murder, Human Failure• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Look past the marionette,tossed and bloodied, whore
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Prepare thee for the bludgeoning hammer
The one that causes your skull to crack and mouth to stammer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Into the mind of the serial killer
Go past the perception that these crimes are thrillers• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tear and peel off the masques of the red death
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You had to be careful of that little girl in that dress
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My eyes fill with blood lust.. I go into an uncontrollable fit of rage..by XxDead-InsidexX 26 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 12 10:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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damn right!!
hehe
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Should I reserve?
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you can if you likes
as long as its finished by the closing date im cool
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Alright. I'll reserve it now so I won't lose my spot lol.
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enter as many times as ye like i dont mind
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entered a write but i'm not TO SURE what you mean by "chat speak". Do you mean like, LOL for laugh out loud? and stuff like that. Or do you mean the killer threatening his victim?
Cause i DO have some pretty twisted verbal mind fuckin between killer and victim.....hope that's ok?
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i mean like typing Cuz instead of because and U instead of you,
thats all hun, and also This I hAtE THiS
i dont like that
but thats what i mean by that, nah im keeping it in
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ONE OTHER THING....
I JUST CHECKED MY COMMENTS and it turns out you read my piece. I DID, HOWEVER, add a lot more to it, so you may want to go back and re-read it? One other thing, i tried to add another one to your contest but my computer won't let me for some odd reason, my puter is severely screwed up....
soooo....
meh, i may have to try again another time or ON a friends computer???? -
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yeah thats fine it open for 2 weeks more so you have time lol thats fine darling
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thank you for the hm sweetheart
congrats to the other winners as well
laura x
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