My best friend/boyfriend is in the hospital... hes kinda in a comma... hes the most amazing boy anyone could ever meet... and i fell in love with him the moment i met him... hes the definition of perfection..
the doctors dont know if hes ever ganna wake up and his moms ganna pull the plug in a month if he doesnt...
he has this brother who is an amazing boy and i cant help but think hes hurt more than anyone in this even if hes hiding all his emotion and his other best freind is freaking out some hardcore stuff.... i just need a poem explain what i wanna say... ( itll be okay and i love all of them)
the picture above is him.. his name is josh..
his his brothers name is ricky and his friends name is ronan..
~!~Rules~!~
1.) no StIckY CaPs ... its annoying...
2.) cussing to a limit please...
3.)if it irellivent in anyway imma dq you :3
4.) dont go reminisin on memories that arnt there...
5.) put ši plug my headphones into my heartš in the authors note so i know you read the rules! thank you!
6.) have fun
the doctors dont know if hes ever ganna wake up and his moms ganna pull the plug in a month if he doesnt...
he has this brother who is an amazing boy and i cant help but think hes hurt more than anyone in this even if hes hiding all his emotion and his other best freind is freaking out some hardcore stuff.... i just need a poem explain what i wanna say... ( itll be okay and i love all of them)
the picture above is him.. his name is josh..
his his brothers name is ricky and his friends name is ronan..
~!~Rules~!~
1.) no StIckY CaPs ... its annoying...
2.) cussing to a limit please...
3.)if it irellivent in anyway imma dq you :3
4.) dont go reminisin on memories that arnt there...
5.) put ši plug my headphones into my heartš in the authors note so i know you read the rules! thank you!
6.) have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 19
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: thanks to everyone for entering all the poems i got were really truley amazing.
congrats to the winners and once again thank you all for entering =)
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hey sorry if this is not good i am very new to this• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I see you laying here In this coma• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Attachment is the cause of sorrow.
So many things I call mine-by Sandip Saha 19 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 11 5:26 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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So very sorry. I will pray for you and your boyfriend as well as the family and friends. He is to young and so handsome. My son died at the young age of 24 so my heart is very sensitive to this matter. Don't give up hope and keep talking and touching him....
With My Love & Prayers
Kelle Marie
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Oh my, that's so sad. I honestly don't know how I could take that. I'm sorry you have to go through this, but you seem to have a right attitude toward it... If you ever need to talk to someone, I'm here for you
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I know how that is hun, my dad died after 2 years in a comma last Valentines day. Visit him as often as you can, and don't give up hope yet.
Lots of love
-Tiff <3
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I'm very sorry about your boyfriend. That is difficult for you and his family, and a frightening time.
He is a handsome guy! I hope for the best for you guys and I'll keep him in my prayers.
Don't feel bad that you don't know what to say - nobody ever does.
The most important thing is for everyone to know he loved them and that he'd never want them to be in pain. -
Oh, I forgot to say that you are handling this extremely well and you are amazingly mature for your age.
Please feel free to message me any time you want to talk.
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