My brother Josh will turn 19 on the 13th. He is a senior in high school and a pain in my ass. However, I was with mom when he stepped on that big school bus for the first time. ( I was only 15 then.) I couldn't believe how small he looked then and how much he has grown and changed since. I have a few specific rules and one request. A few Josh facts: 1. he loves working on vehicles. 2. He is quite the dork, but tries hard to fit in. 3. He craves the attention he didn't get as an only child and the child of divorce.
You take it from there. There will only be one winner, as I haven't enough points to add more, but the points could rise and other winners be added if I make enough points up in time. Thank you so much.
RULES:
1.No sticky caps
2. No profanity or demoralization
3. He is my goofy little brother so be kind
4. No erotic pieces please.
5. He has a struggling inner desire to make others happy
at the cost of his own wants and desires.
Request:
That I be able to give your poem as a gift to my brother for
his birthday....
these are the rules and stipulations. So enter if you please.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 14
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: I was a bit saddened that I didn't have more entries, but the ones I received were well worth reading thank you to all who entered. I appreciate it. Congrats to the winners. gypsy
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
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But to me you're just a little brother
who still hasn't grown upby DyingSweetly 24 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 10:06 PM. In Other, Life, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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J- Josh, I want to greet you a happy birthday!
And all the love will always be with you today…• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Hello everyone
Did I tell you about my new friend Josh?by LoveableAngel 14 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 11:25 AM. In Contest, Thoughts, Weird, Life, Personal, Friendship, Teenage thinking
Bronze trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
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i understand exactly where you're at. my little brother (8 years younger than me), just started college. he's the biggest dork i know, but he's my baby brother and i wouldn't trade him for the world. it's crazy to think that he's technically an adult...i say technically, because he'll always be a kid to me. i changed his diapers, went to a couple parent-teacher things (because my parents never did that sort of thing) and pretty much helped raise him. like your brother, he tries so hard to please people. he's a good kid and a royal pain in the ass. but i love him. give your little bro and big birthday hug from me.
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