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I want to read something posotively beautiful

I've only been a member on this site for a couple of weeks, but I've already won a gold in a contest so I have 576 points to waste... so I've decided to make a contest. I think I've got an idea of the way these should be...

So I'm really into beauty... people, surroundings, anything. And I love to write poems about beauty-- So I think I'd like to read yours.

rules

1. There has to be some BEAUTY in your poem... about beauty or the beauty in something. If you find whatever you're writing about is beautiful in some way that's not obvious, write your reason for submitting it and why you find it beautiful in your notes.
2. Please, NO religious stuff
3. Nothing about suicide or in debth about how you slit your wrists or anything like that. You can talk about how beautiful death is, but I'm over the "suicidal" point in my life and even though this might sound horrible-- I don't want to hear about yours.
4. I think prewrites should be allowed... so you can enter up to three prewrites, four poems in all.
5. Comment on atleast two other poems, it's a nice thing to do.
6. You can curse, but I don't know why you would really feel compelled to when talking about beauty.
7. You can talk about sex and the beauty behind it (because we all know it's amazing) but don't make it like a tacky porno, you're just going to embarass yourself dear.
8. Wait, I can't think of anything else

So you've got what to do, it's not that hard. Just show me something that'll make me feel amazing, and you've got yourself 400 points.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 8, 2004
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    THESE WERE ALL FANTASTIC AND THERE ARE SO MANY PEOPLE THAT DESERVE A MILLION POINTS AND I'M NOT TRYING TO BE TACKY, BUT IT'S TRUE. THESE WERE JUST THE THREE THAT ESPECIALLY FIT MY STYLE, BUT THERE I NEVER EXPECTED SO MANY BEAUTIFUL POEMS ENTERED. YOU'RE ALL AMAZING AND I'M GOING TO STOP TYPING NOW BECAUSE I'M HUNGRY.

Entries [13]

1 - 13 of 13

  • And to you I look
    by Mirage 20 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 5 1:03 AM 2003. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You’re my compass
    My destination of choice
    by Call Me Joe 20 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 18 2:53 PM 2003. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I am sitting here
    For you just left a few moments ago
    by Call Me Joe 28 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 6 12:04 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The wool blanket of night is laid upon me
    by Pegasus's wing
    by zilzil4787 44 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 23 6:13 PM 2004. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You are as convicted as a poorly blown nose
    Often, I will catch brief gossip here and
    by horus8 23 lines, 16 comments, on Feb 24 3:59 PM 2004. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • As the sun rises in the spacious azure
    Grazing the tips of the great mountain peaks
    by Onyx Dragon 48 lines, 43 comments, on Mar 14 12:26 PM 2004. In Society, Other, Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There are already too many stories in this room...
    by allmidnighteyes 24 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 20 11:42 AM 2004. In Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Darling angel you’ll be to me
    Staring you down, want to see
    by Drewce 20 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 2 11:45 AM 2004. In Personal, Other, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by screamingsoft 22 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 19 7:01 PM 2004. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I fell in love with a girl I met a year ago
    Love grabbed me and started to grow
    by Drewce 23 lines, 33 comments, on Apr 23 10:45 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Mr. Sirk, I do say,
    What will come of us today?
    by EleKeats 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 12:55 PM 2004. In Childrens
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The stars in your eyes brighten my world
    Your heart is the sun that burns through my soul,
    by cookiemonster 12 lines, 2 comments, on May 3 11:22 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Just a dream upon a page
    by TheRainKing 25 lines, 8 comments, on May 4 2:00 AM 2004. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • mike a rodriguez
    May 2, 2004
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    i hope you come to my house and kill me anyways.

  • Saaara
    May 2, 2004
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    haha if you really want.
  • mike a rodriguez
    May 2, 2004
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    neat. so it's a date, right?

    pull the pins
    save your grace
    mark these words
    on his grave

  • Saaara
    May 2, 2004
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    it sounds like it is.
  • Xed
    May 4, 2004
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    I APOLOGISE, I DIDNT MEAN TO ENTER "GOODNIGHT"

    sorry once more

    Xed x

  • Saaara
    May 8, 2004
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    I can't believe I got so many entries... and I've entered a few contests, and there'd always be a lot of people who entered that just weren't that good. I know a lot of people say this, but really, these were some of the best poems I've ever read, and it makes me so upset to have to choose a best... especially because i was an idiot and forgot to put in points for second and third place, and i have 641 extra points now. oh well, next contest. anyway, i was very truthful wiht my comments, but, oh my. THESE WERE AMAZING

  • starsnostars
    May 8, 2004
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    ILTL4eva7 should have got gold
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