choose either one of the following 10 lines to use in you poem or write about one of the two topics listed down farther here are the lines if you choose that option
lines:
1.You are my strength when I am weak
2.staring into the mirrior not knowing who you are
3.I'm sorry, Lord, for the thing I've made it
4.Each time a life is taken, one is given
5.Oh be careful little eyes,what you see
6.angelic voices melt my heart
7.You are my all in all
8.Take joy, My King, in what You hear
9.Roses sprinkled with diamond dew
10.i've come to speak your name as my own
if you choose to use one of these lines in a poem it maybe any topic Except Erotica
additional topics allowed:
1.looking at someone and realizing they are beautiful
2.i am speechless and i wish to thank and express my love for my dear cousin who saved me from suicide and showed me life write A poem I can share with Christine
RULES:
1. I don't wanna see erotica unless ur doing the first topic and then it msut be tastefully done if its not it will be dq'd
2.You may choose to donate 5 points,comment on all the entries in this contest or comment on these 3poems :
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/660228
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/571195
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/245463
list ur choice in ur authors comments example "I donated 5 points"
there arent may entries so far but its kinda tricky for fairly judge who followed the rules correctly so that it a fair contest anyone interested leave a comment on the contest and i will choose one lucky person to help
lines:
1.You are my strength when I am weak
2.staring into the mirrior not knowing who you are
3.I'm sorry, Lord, for the thing I've made it
4.Each time a life is taken, one is given
5.Oh be careful little eyes,what you see
6.angelic voices melt my heart
7.You are my all in all
8.Take joy, My King, in what You hear
9.Roses sprinkled with diamond dew
10.i've come to speak your name as my own
if you choose to use one of these lines in a poem it maybe any topic Except Erotica
additional topics allowed:
1.looking at someone and realizing they are beautiful
2.i am speechless and i wish to thank and express my love for my dear cousin who saved me from suicide and showed me life write A poem I can share with Christine
RULES:
1. I don't wanna see erotica unless ur doing the first topic and then it msut be tastefully done if its not it will be dq'd
2.You may choose to donate 5 points,comment on all the entries in this contest or comment on these 3poems :
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/660228
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/571195
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/245463
list ur choice in ur authors comments example "I donated 5 points"
there arent may entries so far but its kinda tricky for fairly judge who followed the rules correctly so that it a fair contest anyone interested leave a comment on the contest and i will choose one lucky person to help
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 2, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: some of you didnt quite read the rules snd i was confused how exactly your poems fit but the trhee i chose as winners really stood out congratulations
Entries [11]
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From death to life
From loss to love• Commented on by judge. -
A rose heals much pain
As petals fall like tears• Commented on by judge. -
I cant believe I'm sitting here,by Come L-oro 79 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 11 8:09 AM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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I blink
i blink• Commented on by judge. -
Be careful little eyes what you see
The tempter lurks behind each treeby iamjeremiah 27 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 22 11:25 AM 2004. In Spiritual, Society, Childrens
Gold trophy winner
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i've come to speak your name as my own
or the spelling of my name is simple.• Commented on by judge. -
Fucked Up Drunk
I drank a shitload of beer,by The Chameleon 14 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 29 1:03 AM 2004. In Adult• Commented on by judge. -
The forgotten prayer• Commented on by judge.
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Darkness without a soulby Blank Page 22 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 29 9:35 AM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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You are my strength when I am weak,
within your arms, comfort I seek• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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you were very creative with this contest idea/format. i will try to come up with a poem to enter.
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I'm sorry lord for the thing I've made it but its all about you its all about you Jesus...I"m coming back to the heart of worship and its all about you all about you Jesus...then...Take joy my King it what you hear may it be a sweet sweet sound in your ear! lol!! I'll think up something to enter, I shall be back!!
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haha you made me laugh used some pretty scare odd lines to right down beacause of what im learning and also because of whjat i prefer to read i dunno tho ur comment jsut made me laugh
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hey i really like this contest i was just thinking of writting a piece for my cousin, she died almost a year ago... i really want to enter this because i was mucking around with a few lines that remind mne of my cousin before i read your contest and one of the things that came to min\d was the song by celine dion... because u loved me... was one of my cousins favourite songs and a line from that just happens to be one of your lines, freaky hey??? anyway i will give this a go, im alos going to try make it something u can show ure cousin about how special a cousin is....b3l
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ok well i did it but im not sure what i think of it s alot differnt and its free verse which im not that fond of but i hope u like it anyway it was really hard to write....b3l
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If you'd like help judging, I'd be more than happy to help you out.
This is a great contest. I hope it goes well for you.
Shadowdragon -
i don't like the idea that we have to donate points.
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you dont have to donate points u can comment on the three poems with links lsited above
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wow this was a great contest...thanks for holding it and congrats to the other winners! and kudos to everyone that entered...i loved reading you're work...thank you for having this contest!!
The Fraud -
i didnt understand what you wanted.
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i changed my poem back into a regular poem!
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