Okay folks this my first contest.
I consider myself to be pretty open minded, so most anything goes.
All I ask is please keep the self abuse and suicide to yourself I do not want to read but that stuff,in fact there is only one way a suicide poem can win and that is if it has a death certificate and obit attached to it. Other than that I am open.
First place gets 400 points
Second place gets 100 points
Third place gets 50 points
I will also give 50 points to the most off the wall entry
I.e sdrawkcab netirw,in the form of a crossword puzzle.....
Here come those dreaded rules
1. Only two per person
2. NoNe Of ThIs I don't like it.
3. Try to keep it clean
4. Real words no chat lingo(unless it is written completely in chat form)
5.Comment on at least 3 entries. I am not vain so I wont ask you to comment on any of my stuff.I will comment on all
6. above all have fun and may the best poet win
7. Put(Bite Me) in your author's comments box so I know that you read all of this
I consider myself to be pretty open minded, so most anything goes.
All I ask is please keep the self abuse and suicide to yourself I do not want to read but that stuff,in fact there is only one way a suicide poem can win and that is if it has a death certificate and obit attached to it. Other than that I am open.
First place gets 400 points
Second place gets 100 points
Third place gets 50 points
I will also give 50 points to the most off the wall entry
I.e sdrawkcab netirw,in the form of a crossword puzzle.....
Here come those dreaded rules
1. Only two per person
2. NoNe Of ThIs I don't like it.
3. Try to keep it clean
4. Real words no chat lingo(unless it is written completely in chat form)
5.Comment on at least 3 entries. I am not vain so I wont ask you to comment on any of my stuff.I will comment on all
6. above all have fun and may the best poet win
7. Put(Bite Me) in your author's comments box so I know that you read all of this
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 10, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: I want to thank everyone for entering.
There is a lot of talent here witch made judging very hard indeed.
I had two entries in mind for the bonus but the author of one of them pulled her entry witch is a shame because I really liked it.
so the bonus goes to (wobniaR)
Honorable mentions will get 25 points each.
they are ( in no order)
Facade
All the world's a slag
My heart feels at peace
Beautif*ck
Unconditional loveDepression and its ugly head
I sing for the gift of poetry
Entries [33]
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The ice and cold,
Surprisingly,by Whisper Mckee 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 14 8:56 PM 2002. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
In the darkness of the night
Who will hear your screams• Commented on by judge. -
Quiet, shy, timid, and young
The girl starts to think life is no fun• Commented on by judge. -
I stare deeply
Into your black eyes• Commented on by judge. -
Fallen from heavens grace am I. Never again shall I see the land of my lord. bound for ever on this plane of vermin that he loves. they fight each other for petby demonwithinme 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 12 2:05 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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I am a tiny seed.
Give me water to feed.• Commented on by judge. -
My veins itch for your velvet razors,
I scream for what seems like hours,• Commented on by judge. -
It couldn't be more perfect
The night was so rare,• Commented on by judge. -
by shastadaisey123 52 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 11 2:22 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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I'm wirtnig you a peom aoubt sellping
And the fcat taht you dno't need to be birght• Commented on by judge. -
I m feeling so controlled
its something in my head,by BleedingRose13 12 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 6 9:16 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Smiling down on me, blessing me with happiness
Knowing for once that you're alright.by LaAmyaArlene 46 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 20 7:14 PM 2004. In Spiritual, Love, Hope
Silver trophy winner
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I do believe the lord above
Created you for me to loveby jp carruzo 20 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 22 5:56 PM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. -
As I sit here I’m crying once again
Those words forever haunting me• Commented on by judge. -
When you feel so alone,
completely vacated• Commented on by judge. -
• Commented on by judge.
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tired, so tired
I've been fighting for so longby White Lily 12 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 6 12:30 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Remember you can rise like the sun after defeat
Conquering depression as it rears its ugly head• Commented on by judge. -
I am a blank page. My paper has tattered, torn, aged, yet it sits. Blank.• Commented on by judge.
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Yes,
Don’t ask me to join you.by ruminations 42 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 9 11:45 AM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
Calm yourself child!
I dare say,• Commented on by judge. -
Monkeys Can Eat Shitzus
So there was this monkey,by The Chameleon 9 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 9 4:41 PM 2004. In Humor• Commented on by judge. -
I write to you as a token of love
To tell you of my deadly plans• Commented on by judge. -
they rise in the blackness of night
their goal, to fill you with fright• Commented on by judge. -
i love how everything born must die
i love the nightby stargazer76 26 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 9 10:27 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
MURDERING SOMEONEby mrssantiago 33 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 10:55 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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That one poem, I didnt mean to enter, but yeah...I accidently clicked the wrong poem, so I put the author comment thing anyways.
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Re: 5.Comment on all entries
I have so far commented on all the entries but as this is an open contest on any topic and prewrites are allowed and I can pretty much guarantee you will get an awful lot of entries, I'm not sure I am going to be able to comment on them ALL.
My whole time on this site would be dedicated soley to commenting on the poems in this one contest.
Most contests only ask for entrants to leave critiques on 2 or 3 of the other poems, after that it is left to their discretion to comment on any others.
Kat xxx -
thank you for pointing that out I have changed it to 3 I meant to say I would comment on all.
Roger -
Phew !!!!
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Thanks for a great contest, O Shadowy One!!! hehehe
Very cool ideas for a write...& I have to admit, I ROFLMAO over your comments about the requirements for a poem on suicide...
THANK YOU!!! hehehe
Good luck, everyone!!!
Wanda
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Well tall Dark and Shadowy you got your contest up...hooray!! Have fun with it, looks like you're getting flooded with entries already! LOL...I liked the suicide conditions too
!gnidaer yppaH Karen -
me and my eroticas...naughty me...
*~anaillirT~* -
Sonnets Bless Haiku
Poetry is beauty that moves in graceful flow,
Bold formed words they swim quickly by,
Sonnets bless Haiku with a Villanelle glow.
Free verse wanders past the green light of go
While Limericks throw humour out to a sigh,
Poetry is beauty that moves in graceful flow.
Iambic steps forward with thoughts of I know
How to use syllables dropped from the sky,
Sonnets bless Haiku with a Villanelle glow.
Lyrical literature laughs language into a bow,
Prose nods agreement saying poems will not die,
Poetry is beauty that moves in graceful flow.
Cinquain relaxes gently upon perfumed throw
As she closes her lids she begins to cry,
Sonnets bless Haiku with a Villanelle glow.
Rythmic gymnastics perform - breathe and blow.
Life dreaming inside the waves of an eye.
Poetry is beauty that moves in graceful flow.
Sonnets bless Haiku with a Villanelle glow.
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When we comment on the other poems are we supposed to put that in the authors comment or do u trust us enough..
!~JennI~!
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No you do not have to tell me who you commented on as I read all peoms and all comments on them..but yes that is more of a trust rule.
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I hope you atleast like the poem I'm not in it to win just prmote my writing a little and to meet new peots,but i do think it would be fun if i gave some abit of compatition
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hope i made it in time, i noticed your name is roger, lol great name, thought i was the only one, anyway i mostly entered so my work would at least get read a little. good luck with all the judging, looks like a lot of work for you...lol
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Thank you for the honorable mention
Congrads to the winners!
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Thanks for the Honorable Mention for my poem, 'I Sing for the Gift of Poetry'...it means a lot to me...great contest...
Congrats, everyone!!!
Wanda
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