I've been going through a lot the last few months, in all reality its been the last year and a half...but pretty much the last few weeks have been the hardest to keep going, and the worse to live through.
Choices:
1. My Angel Jessie died...our birthday is coming up soon, in about a month. Its making me depressed because it will be our 2nd birthday apart from eachother since she left. I always loved that we had the same b-day, but now its haunting me...Write a birthday poem for her and I, saying how hard it would be, give me emotion, but make it sad.
2. Has one of your friends ever died? If not, pretend one did...tell me how it would feel(teens preferably about).
3. I suffer from cutting, anxiety, and maybe an eating disorder...oh yeah, did I say depression?
Write a poem about how I should get help, why I need to get better. Why you would miss me, and need me here. (I dont want pity, I'd just like to see...this choice is for people that know me, my friends, and people in my group ONLY)
4. Tell me a way that you deal with your pain. Me, I dont eat, I dont sleep, I have depression, and I cut. Give me a good or bad, possitive, or negative way to deal with pain..and how it helps you.
5. Write about dying from heart break...why your heart was broken, and how it would feel if you died.
Rules:
1. No chat speak or WrItInG like that..annoying.
2. spell check.
3. In the author comments tell me if the poem is true or not, also put 'I dont want to be remembered weak, but remembered as strong, for all the years I fought to stay alive' a quote by me
4. No more then 3entries a person
5. Originals are perferred, but you can have 1prewrite
6. Comment on one of my poems, and one other entry in the contest (If possible).
2nd and 3rd will get points..and maybe top 2honorable mentions
Choices:
1. My Angel Jessie died...our birthday is coming up soon, in about a month. Its making me depressed because it will be our 2nd birthday apart from eachother since she left. I always loved that we had the same b-day, but now its haunting me...Write a birthday poem for her and I, saying how hard it would be, give me emotion, but make it sad.
2. Has one of your friends ever died? If not, pretend one did...tell me how it would feel(teens preferably about).
3. I suffer from cutting, anxiety, and maybe an eating disorder...oh yeah, did I say depression?
Write a poem about how I should get help, why I need to get better. Why you would miss me, and need me here. (I dont want pity, I'd just like to see...this choice is for people that know me, my friends, and people in my group ONLY)4. Tell me a way that you deal with your pain. Me, I dont eat, I dont sleep, I have depression, and I cut. Give me a good or bad, possitive, or negative way to deal with pain..and how it helps you.
5. Write about dying from heart break...why your heart was broken, and how it would feel if you died.
Rules:
1. No chat speak or WrItInG like that..annoying.
2. spell check.
3. In the author comments tell me if the poem is true or not, also put 'I dont want to be remembered weak, but remembered as strong, for all the years I fought to stay alive' a quote by me
4. No more then 3entries a person
5. Originals are perferred, but you can have 1prewrite
6. Comment on one of my poems, and one other entry in the contest (If possible).
2nd and 3rd will get points..and maybe top 2honorable mentions
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 18, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: These are just the poems that hit me the most..I think I commented on everyone
Entries [10]
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I crave complete oblivion
but I find it only with little white pills• Commented on by judge. -
With thier lifeless eyes
Staring back at meby PainOfTwig 36 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 21 8:49 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
As she looked into the casket. She saw her best friends face. not even 6 months ago she never got to say goodbye. Here's what happened that 6 months ago.
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A Poem In Loving Memory of my Vicki• Commented on by judge.
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The old me is dead but sometimes it lurks.
I see the old me most when I'm hurt.by papercutangel86 35 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 14 9:33 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
You left me so fast, you didn't even tell
Why did you leave, into a black pit i fell• Commented on by judge. -
by Applesauce 70 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 2:58 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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A smile escaped my lips.
I gently tapped my finger tips.• Commented on by judge.
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I WILL DEFINATELY ADD ONE HERE!!! I haven't read the rules and stuff yet (wanted to be the first one to give a reaction
) but I'll try to find something hun!!
Leander -
CAN I ENTER TWO???
I had like...a sudden impact of inspiration 
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i'm entering this one.Don't close it early on me again.lol.
and 
to feel better LaLa cause i know your position is hard i've been there before.
Hugs.
Mandi -
What a wonderfully moving contest! You've offered a great deal of options to write about, and I think I can definitely muster something up for ya!
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I really, really love this contest, LaLa. By helping you your helping us. It makes me happy . ....
I think everyone who is relating to this should listen to this song by Avril Lavigne. Its called "Slipped Away". It made me cry. Love ya !!
~*)()(Evolence)()(*~
Edited on Oct 15, 3:25 p.m. because 'song title . . . silly me'. -
Slipped Away is my favoriet song by Avril, and at the moment, Im obsessed with it, and have been for weeks. It is a real meaningful song, and means a lot to me, makes me think so much about Jessie, and my other 3angels...everyone who has ever lost someone should listen to it.
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I entered two acrostics...One new and one pre-write...I hope that is okay for this contest! Great idea for a contest by the way!
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