Hey, everyone! This is my very first contest so forgive me if things go a lil bumpy 
! I want you to picture the one person in your life who makes all the trials and tribulations worth overcoming so you can live another day just to see their smiling face! You know, that one special person whom your life revovles around. You wake up thinking of them and you go to sleep to dream of them. Now, think of how life would be without them if they suddenly vanished. Their shoulder is no longer there for you to cry on. Without their warm embrace, you are suddenly cold. The absence of their hand makes you realize you are alone. Descibe to me how all these realizations make you feel. I'd like details, none of that... "you are gone i am sad"... anyone can write that. I want true talent. Make me FEEL your tears run down my face... make me crave the feel of this person's touch. Everything you go through, I want to be there.
! I want you to picture the one person in your life who makes all the trials and tribulations worth overcoming so you can live another day just to see their smiling face! You know, that one special person whom your life revovles around. You wake up thinking of them and you go to sleep to dream of them. Now, think of how life would be without them if they suddenly vanished. Their shoulder is no longer there for you to cry on. Without their warm embrace, you are suddenly cold. The absence of their hand makes you realize you are alone. Descibe to me how all these realizations make you feel. I'd like details, none of that... "you are gone i am sad"... anyone can write that. I want true talent. Make me FEEL your tears run down my face... make me crave the feel of this person's touch. Everything you go through, I want to be there.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 1, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: I'd like to thank all of you for entering my contest. It was a VERY tough decision. All of you are such great writers and I enjoyed every minute of reading. Please be sure to enter my next contest, I look forward to more wonderful pieces. Tootles!
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PLEASE DON'T GO!• Commented on by judge.
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The night silence was a shovel
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He spun the chamber of life..
nothing happened..he was surprised!• Commented on by judge. -
If you ever read my letters
please write back to me.• Commented on by judge. -
The door is closed,
You’re gone,• Commented on by judge. -
People say Dont look back,
Because you dont know what your lookin' at,• Commented on by judge. -
I've cried so many nights for you
I've tried my best to fight it but the tears still come.by bignikki88 44 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 25 10:51 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I didn't want it to happen
But it did anywayby DefinitiveFreak 41 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 5 6:41 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I love looking at you from across the room,
I stare, and look, and look at you because your my flower that blooms,by Hate Me Im Emo 37 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 20 6:49 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Am I suppose to forget all those times you said forever?
What about my senior prom, you promised you'd be here.• Commented on by judge. -
I miss him :(• Commented on by judge.
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Never new it would end up like this,
Wish I got to say goodbye,by inlove4ever 69 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 5 7:02 PM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
It's a poem I loved writing enjoy itby Hate Me Im Emo 43 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 8 2:38 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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My mother's second birthday not here was Saturday
October Ninth so I'm sort of missing her a lot.• Commented on by judge. -
But never try to put her down,
And never try to tame her wonderful spirit.by DemonMonkeyJack 24 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 18 8:26 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
can anyone help me
can anyone see me• Commented on by judge. -
A day equal to a nightmare
Yet you smile made my eyes shine• Commented on by judge. -
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I dont need enything
No foodby no1special 27 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 19 8:27 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I love you
Do You Love Me Too?by Hate Me Im Emo 62 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 20 6:57 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
THOSE ARE THE WORDS THAT TEAR ME APART!!!by Hate Me Im Emo 25 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 24 6:55 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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Do you know how much
I would do for you?by no1special 41 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 24 9:44 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Some call it an unhealthy obsession,
A compulsion that cannot be resisted.by Miyaviness 37 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 24 10:53 PM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge. -
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(Deep Breaths)
I'm breathing in,• Commented on by judge. -
heartbreaks for the weak
for those who can't copeby ForgottenGirl 19 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 27 8:51 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I'm in a somber mood today
Even the sky is turning grey.• Commented on by judge. -
Me - here - alone.• Commented on by judge.
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you are a blank mask behind a white lie
you look at me with hollow eyes• Commented on by judge. -
The phone rings, I say “hello”
A voice full of tears replies:by Daring2Dream18 54 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 28 8:45 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
you're gone, i'm gone, here nothing lies,
Our bed is now empty as i'm left to cry,• Commented on by judge. -
And you woln't be there to say "It's just the same"
If you're not thereby Artemis Gem 28 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 3:31 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I wanna see, and be with you everyday,
So please baby, PLEASE STAY!• Commented on by judge. -
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Let us cry/We thought we saw something/In an Illusion/of no substance• Commented on by judge.
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Seeing how Im going through this right now...and the love of my life really did leave me, I have a few poems...how many can we enter?
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I'd have been the shadow of your dog
if I thought it might have kept me
by your side...
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good luck to everyone who entered and good luck judging!
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