Hello everyone!
Just another contest.... and it will be my 7th! I'll get right to the point...
Thanks to Suicide Child for her lovely gift of points for this contest
I want you to write me a poem about the person who brought a great change in your life, or supported you and helped you survive, either unconsciously or consciously... Just give me best emotions and describe that special person in best words! It can also be about a pet that brought change to your life...
Some Rules:
PLEASE NO EROTICA/CUSSING! I am only 15
Please submit extreme 2 enteries
Don't make it too long ie, not more than 25 lines
Pre-writes are allowed only if the entry is best for the topic!
And thats all dear friends...
God bless you all,
Lonely~
Just another contest.... and it will be my 7th! I'll get right to the point...
Thanks to Suicide Child for her lovely gift of points for this contest
I want you to write me a poem about the person who brought a great change in your life, or supported you and helped you survive, either unconsciously or consciously... Just give me best emotions and describe that special person in best words! It can also be about a pet that brought change to your life... Some Rules:
PLEASE NO EROTICA/CUSSING! I am only 15 Please submit extreme 2 enteries Don't make it too long ie, not more than 25 lines Pre-writes are allowed only if the entry is best for the topic! And thats all dear friends...
God bless you all,
Lonely~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 7, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Hello everyone
Entries [22]
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I step out into the hall,
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We always say the words "I love you"
aren't strong enough.• Commented on by judge. -
Couldn’t sleep after seeing you yesterday, pursuing you through my mind in the dark.
Couldn’t shake the feeling; try as I might, sailing stormy seas in a fby OneideJack 16 lines, 1 comment, on May 26 11:10 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Oh God
So many times you've blessed me• Commented on by judge. -
You,
Are the first person I think about in the morning.• Commented on by judge. -
I was never quite, scared to die.
But when I thought of you, I began to cry.• Commented on by judge. -
fountains of love flow
through my tender heart,by carlspenc1 18 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 12:08 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Never happy, tears always falling down my face.
Love was always stupid, first to die seemed the race.by LaAmyaArlene 37 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 14 9:15 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Sisters by chance.
Best Friends by choice.• Commented on by judge. -
And as I closed my eyes
I wept silently• Commented on by judge. -
love is worth dying for.by carlspenc1 20 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 9 2:15 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU
Its not that I can't live without youby Inlovewithdan 18 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 16 11:38 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
You took the time to see what's inside,
took the time to gaze into my eyes,by HopelessRomance 12 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 18 2:51 PM 2004. In Personal, Other, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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You consume me love. There is nothing I would not do for you. Dreamy nights... Half cocked afternoons… Consumed with thoughts of you. Touch me... touch yby OneideJack 14 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 19 6:30 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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There was a time, where nothing seemed right,
Then you came along and showed me the light.by thecrzyblndgirl 11 lines, on Oct 27 6:38 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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You are always there for me
You help with severe problems• Commented on by judge. -
~~ HE WAS THER FOR ME ~~• Commented on by judge.
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That very moment with her eyes,
In A MOMENT, she changed my life.• Commented on by judge.
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Heya Nice to see you have a contest The best of luck with it, and i would like to offer 3 x 10 points for honourable mentionas if you would accept it
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hey there yaar, sorry yaar looks liek i wont be able to enter , sorry haan kuch soojha he nai ...acha tum kasee hoo , sehat teek hay?
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I entered one of my prewrites for you. I hope that 30 lines isnt too long. They are pretty short lines though. If they are let me know and I will take it out. Thanks!!
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Hi there,
I have to say that this is a great idea for a contest and I just watned to wish you the very best of luck with the judging and wish everyone the best of luck who enters. However I have entered a poem just over the amount of lines you have said. Nonetheless all the lines are very short. So like Despairkitty said if this is too many. I'll Just take it out. Best of wishes to you and yours
Blue moon
P.S Have a great day -
Whoops, I accidentally submitted Windows To The Soul. Please don't judge that one, please! It's the top of my prewrite list ye see, and I accidentally hit the submit button instead of the arrow to open the list. Whoops, me sorry!
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Thank you for entering Blue Moon
your poem is really great, thank you for entering, and since the lines are short, i really don't mind..
Best of luck,
Lonely~
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THANK YOU for a great contest and Congratulations to all the winners
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thank you for the sweet words
May God bless you,
Lonely~
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