hi I am amanda and i like writing duh so yes I spend most of my time painting,drawing, writing and designing clothes. Also I like comments that are helpful not hurtful.
if you do not like my poem then I would like you to tell me how I can fix it or make it better. What I do not want you to do is tell me how much my poem sucks.
I am here not only to write but, to learn from others.
P.S I do like nice comments as well
if you do not like my poem then I would like you to tell me how I can fix it or make it better. What I do not want you to do is tell me how much my poem sucks.
I am here not only to write but, to learn from others.
P.S I do like nice comments as well
- Last seen 9 hours ago. Member since February 1.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 94 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is the worst thing a person can say is I give up.
- I am a 15 year old girl from Massachusetts (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm drawing.
- I am in the groups For All of Those Who Feel Lost or Alone, Marilyn Manson fans ONLY, Nightwish, Not Alone, Poets Against Child Abuse
- I have 94 comments, 2 contests
My Poetry
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I watch the drops of blood flow sweetly to the floor
A piecing scream oh! the ecstasy!23 lines, 1 comment, September 19. In Dark -
I was at the end of my line
top of the hill ready to go16 lines, 4 comments, August 25 -
trying to be normal
but with every passing day i know you better11 lines, 1 comment, August 11. In Thoughts -
come to the floor that has no ending come to the place of no forgiving
Visitor Book
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DitzyXXXFreak on March 24nope that's me =) and you are Amanda O'Brien?
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Redrum Requiem on February 21Okay, I know this is so random, but would your last name happen to be O'Brien? If it isn't you can just brush me off as being crazy, but I was just curious.
