Meteoritekid

It's poetry. If it sounds good, I like it.
Beyond that, please read a few of what I've written...I enjoy whatever you can throw at me in the way of a comment or critique...
Thanks,
j

Last seen 2 hours ago. Member since April 30, 2007.
I'm a peridot parrot poet for 36 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "'because i feel like it.'".
I am a 18 year old guy from California (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm living...but i do this while I write, too..
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I am in the groups Poetry for ages twelve through eightteen, Vocabulary for Poets and Writers
I have 36 comments

My Poetry

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fRiENDship

There’s simply no place for the good
Or the innocent, the pure of heart,

36 lines, May 25. In Humor, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Freewrite, Loss, Abstract
the thought

The thought, pervading, begins to unfurl,
A smile, triumphant, begins with a curl,

25 lines, 3 comments, December 11, 2007
[ J’ai reçu une lettre demain, ]

J’ai reçu une lettre demain,
Elle a parlé d’un homme,

24 lines, November 8, 2007
[ with love and in the air and all, ]

with love and in the air and all,
those feelings, ideas, they never fall,

41 lines, 5 comments, November 6, 2007