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Cloud Nine Lives

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There is a place in Heaven for kittens,
a place they play and all have a ball.
Roll around on soft billowy clouds,
angel cats catch them if they ever fall.

Older cats earn their special wings,
after they use up all ninelives below.
The day they die and go up to Heaven,
they receive their wings and a halo.

They protect and care for the kittens,
nurture and teach them to get along.
Angel cats will always be near by,
all meowing a sweet heavenly song.

When a cat or kitten passes away,
not to worry, they are Heaven bound.
Now be quiet and listen carefully,
from clouds you hear purring sounds.






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  • x-Team Edward-x
    August 26

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    ohh my god!!!! this is so beautiful!!!! it makes me so happy!thanks much for entering!
    best of luck!

  • Elvenfairy
    February 9, 2007

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    this was such a great poem! Hey can I show this to my cousin? Her cat was hit by a car up at her farm in VT the other day. She is really bumed, this might cheer her up. Anyways, this was such a good poem! I am sure anyone who has lost a loved cat will like this.

    Oh man, you are such a talented poet! I feel like a horse doctor in comparison to you! But then again, I don't really have much time to write poetry lately, so I haven't exactly been an active poet, just an active conetst holder.

    Anyways, did I say I liked this poem?

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 3, 2005
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    Wow so nice of you yto read one of my older poems. I do appreciate that. Take care, Sandy
  • immortalbloodsucker
    April 1, 2005
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    This is very nice and i think that its true, unfortunatly i dont think its true for humans, but then again it is about cats, lol. Nice write.

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 24, 2005
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    Thank you Dhris for the nice comment. Yea we all have pets that we get attached to and always outlive them. Take care my friend. God bless, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 24, 2005
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    Thank you Susan for the lovely comment. This was a great contest. Take care and God bless. Sandy

  • SusanL
    January 23, 2005
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    I like that last stanza - the idea of puring from the clouds... Is that the whisper on the wind we hear?
    thank you for this lovely entry.
    Susan

  • January 23, 2005
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    Ah this is sweet, pet memorial poems are well sought after online Sandy, I’ve done the odd one over time. I can empathise with the thought as we grow attached just like we do with family, and it’s sad to lose a pet, leaves an emptiness. God Bless

  • BeautifullyBurned
    January 23, 2005
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    Aww naw. Good luck with everything!
    *~*Nat

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 23, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy

  • BeautifullyBurned
    January 23, 2005
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    This was SO cute! I love kittys! I have had them even before I was born. I'd die without them!
    Luv yaz!
    --Nat

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 23, 2005
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    Thank you Tamara ,I have no idea where the little kittys will wind up. If not Heaven I'm sure a nice place near by. Take care, and God bless you. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 23, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Ladybug
    January 23, 2005
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    well, I am sorry to argue, but don't you have to have a soul to enter heaven? gosh I hope you are right for I love my kitty soooo much and I look forward to Star being in heaven with me.
  • Mia Donna
    January 22, 2005
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    You know, I love this because some people I know don't believe pets go to Heaven I think they do!
    Edited on Jan 22, 8:46 p.m. because ''.
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