Candyfloss Virgins,
And Lollipop Boys,
Monkeys and Rabbits,
And Porn Preachers Toys.
Author notes
yes.....not really much i can say.....yes, i might change it when i think of something better...
Written February 5th, 2005
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it seems like your writings are very catchy and sing-song but still manage to get across a powerful message. nice work.
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lay off the aerosols
lol, where did this come from??
i like it, but dont know why! -
For some reason, this reminds me of Orgy's CD Candyass, and Manson's song "Dope Show" put together. Which is NEVER a bad thing... in any way.
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very nicely worded in such a small amount of words, "Candyfloss Virgins" awesome opening line i must say, thanks for the comment, this poem has made me curious about your other writings
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This was cute. Love the juxtapositions. Amazing how you said so much in such few lines
If you're often writing stuff like this, you might be interested in joining my group, Dirtyglitterbabydolls. its kinda on a similar vein to this poem!
Cheers
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Short and sweet..awesome poem!
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ooh i like it - it's short, but it has a good rythmn and i like the way you put the words together. Great poem.
pinkxxx -
Yey, thanx
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yea, this is short, but i like it....it's kinda early manson-ish, which is great lol
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i like this poem! its very colorful.
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why thankyou
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lol my kind of sweet shop. Hehehe! sweet poem. i liked the simplicity in it and I liked the sentence:"Porn Preachers Toys" I saw a possible hidden meaning in it. Yummy poem
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