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Beautiful Music

Missing image
You take my hand
& Music begins...

you smile
& I blush ~

we move closer
& start to sway

until we each find
the rhythm of the other's
Heart
& dancing is inevitable...

Your arms around me
with assurance,
I sigh & relax,
letting the feelings
take me where they may,

as long as I'm with you...

Oh, this is a lovely
joining of Souls ~

a beautiful conversation
in Silence...

You smile gently, once more,
& I blush again,

the currents finding their way
through my veins ~

I will follow
where you lead...


       ~ February 13, 2005
             12:15 p.m.



Author notes

Picture credit: 'Peeking Through' by Poet ILTL4eva7 ~
my Friend Kelsey... If you'd like to see a beautiful swan picture she drew for me, her Swanee, please see this link:
www.allpoetry.com/poem/959330
Please visit her author's page for links to more of her art...she's really QUITE good... Love ya, Kels!!!

Written February 13th, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    You always make me smile, Ian...& I love Peter Gabriel...'specially "Salsbury Hill" & "Your Eyes"... Wanda
  • ian sawicki
    September 27, 2006
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    music - all i hear is music, guaranteed to smile, and i look for something else - peter gabriel. music and love, they go hand in hand spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...