When our eyes meet,
there will be dancing
in silence ~
Music will not be needed,
for we won't hear anything
over the staccato rhythm
of our hearts...
Shadows will move
into sunlight
unnoticed ~
the stars may fall
while the moon wanes
& we would not see...
There is an intensity
defined by awe
when spirits meet
in recognition ~
The world spins
out of control,
unaware...
As you walk towards me,
eyes blazing
with Knowledge,
there is a low moan
that begins
in my Soul
& ends on my lips ~
I've been waiting...
~ February 12, 2005
6:30 p.m.
Author notes
Artist unknown
Written February 13th, 2005
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as I read each line moves me
every word fills my mind in wonder of how well you write.I am slowly savoring your poetry which taste to my mind so delicate. Now reading through the amazing works on your page.
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the death of the senses while in a senseless world loves and lovers create definitions of their own - for sight, hearing, beauty surrounding and beauty internal. this is what you call Knowledge, the way i see and understand it. and when a moan transcends fom immaterial to material, from bodyless to bodyfull - is when you know you accepted the newly created reality. beautiful poetry.
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wow...i don't know what to say to that...
i'll say..it speaks to me. i feel i can relate.
keep writing.
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I feel it was penned for you and me alone. I want to take it as my own, as OUR own, and never let it go.
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the world of man is always spinning out of control...and anaware...because it does not hear "the low moan that begins in its soul and ends on its lips"...nor does it quiver at the tought of stopping for a moment...just to catch a breath of wind spoken to an aging poet...but I do...
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Thank you, Maggie...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Thanks for hosting a great contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Oh wow . . . this was incredible! Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck to you in the contest!
Maggie -
Thank you, Liz...This is still one of my own favorites, simply because it was more passionate than I was accustomed to writing...& I've always believed that rather than merely 'making love', we should be creating it...Many of my poems are drawn from memories of my late sweetheart...True love never dies...Thank you for reading me so well, my Friend...
Wanda
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You were right, Wanda. I DO like this one very much. I love the musical reference and, again, I like the idea of the moan within the soul. It amazes me how you capture the idea of being in love so well. You are such an incredible writer. THank you for sharing your talents.
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I had a good teacher, my Friend...Thanks, Karen... Wander
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Oh girl, you have such a beautiful way with love
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Thank you, Joyce...You cannot be destroyed by Love, my Friend...If he goes before you, he's only putting a candle in the window so you can find your way Home, dear Lady...don't forget that...I'm sending you a link...you'll see what I mean...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda
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So Breathtaking!!!
Wanda, Another beautiful love poem from your pen. A soulmate is the best. I feel blessed to have found mine and would be destroyed if I lost him. Your words always fill the mind with such vivid images and portraits just like the one you used here. Thank you for sharing another work of art with all of us.
Love and blessings to you. 
Joyce
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Thank you very much, Kuragari91...I'm glad you liked it...thanks for comin' by... Wanda
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Thanks, Mary...& yeah, you can say anything ya wanna...it's called 'poetic license'...I have one in my purse...
Thanks, my Friend...I'm glad ya liked it so much...it's one of my own favorites, as well... Swanee
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This is a great poem! Beautiful! It's very magnificent! I love the description and the wording. Keep up the great work!
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Let me say that again... !!! WOW! Breathtakingly stunning {Worries whether she can use those two words together in proper english... 
} Swanee, this is one of the best you've done in at least a day The emotion in this is passionately strong, yet overflows with grace and class. Your word choices are wonderful, and reflect such depth of feeling. The flow is perfectly smooth. Such a powerful, and beautiful opening stanza. You 'feel' the words right away. But, the ending is my fav!
As you walk towards me,
eyes blazing
with Knowledge,
there is a low moan
that begins
in my Soul
& ends on my lips ~
I've been waiting...
Such infinite beauty in these words, and it leaves you hanging within the experience you so aptly portray. Marvelous write, Wander. One of my favs by you. Exquisite.
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Glad you liked the poem, anyway...I guess 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder'...I didn't see that at all...I saw a passionate painting of Beauty...Thanks for reading...
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Indeed, Eddy...& once we know the difference, how can we settle for less? Thanks, my Friend... Wanda
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Thank you, Big Jake...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda
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The read was great; since you said you wanted a "true crtique" The woman looks to me like she's stumbling through a door sick .. sorry.
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Very nice...I could feel the vibrations in this line
"there is a low moan
that begins
in my Soul
& ends on my lips ~"
It's a shame so many people try to force love for the real thing is way more enjoyable...
Hugs...Eddy
Living for love not being in love...what a difference between
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Wanda, it was beautiful. You have captured a ideal that I have always toyed with and love, the dancing by heartbeat rhythm. alone this made the image carry forth and the poem enjoyable.
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Thank you, Scribe...that means a lot to me, coming from you...I appreciate your kind words, my Friend... Thanks, Muddy... Wanderer
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Thank you, Linda...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda
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timeless
This piece is so very special; how our lives should be filled.
You have much more, than the heart of a poet. This kind of passion is timeless.
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WOW! GREAT POEM WITH DEEP SENSUALALITY..best of luck in the contest! Linda
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Awww, shucks, Miss Kitty...think nothin' of it, my Friend...'tweren't nothin' 'tall...hehehe
Love ya, Lil... 
♥ Wander
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Oh Beautiful, such grace and passion flows from your delicate fingers. I never tire of reading you, as your love for all things renews my love as well. This is stunning in every way. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art.
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Ok, DonnasGuy...your wish is my command...LOL... Have a look at my author's page...you'll see why I'm laughin'...& I always put an elipsis at the end...there's always more to be continued...hehehe Thanks for reading, Michael...nice to meetcha!!!
Wanda
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great poem with alot of emotion and alot more of imagery lol, this is the first poem today to get my applause, good job
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Wonderful
nice write
it was good to read
but with the elipsis at the end i want more i feel that u must write more lol
~Michael~
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oh, wonderful.. i really really enjoyed this poem.. There are some awesome poets on this site and some of those have pieces which just leave me in awe... this is one of those...
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I liked this loved the picture to . The only bit i thought looked odd was the use of & in the second to last stanza , to me it just didnt look as if you should have been abreviating
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Wow this is really good.
"Music will not be needed,
for we couldn't hear anything
over the staccato rhythm
of our Hearts..."
Talk about passion! You managed to jump right over the cliches of "I love you I couldn't live without you" into something deeper. Great job with that, it's more than I can do!
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Not that you need anymore praise then you already have, but this is romantic and beautiful.
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I kinda like this one, too, Annie...but I am thrilled beyond words that your entry, 'Memories', won the Gold...not just 'cause of the subject, but also 'cause you're my Bestest Friend...Love ya, Annie!!! ♥ Wander
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Wander! congatulations!!!! Geez girlfriend, this is one of the beauties I most adore! Love ya my sweet friend, Annie
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Thanks, Judge Jen...hehehe Actually, I like this one better than a lot of my other ones...thanks for your Time... ♥ Wanda
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ok heres your honest comment.. with the judge hat still on..hehe.
i liked this one better than the last one i read, to be honest. it seemed more...complete, almost. beautiful imagery again, and superb expression of emotions...great job
Jen
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Thanks, Silver...I'm glad you enjoyed it...I appreciate your Time... Wanda
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Thanks, Nikki...glad you liked it...I appreciate ya, Poet... Wanda
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I really enjoyed reading this, I definently felt the love flowing nicely through the words. Good write. And good luck on winning! ~Silver
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i love the way it was written in the different lines
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Thank you, Jennifer...I'm happy you liked it...I appreciate your Time...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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A wonderdul poem on your soul mate, I enjoyed reading it very much, it is so full of emotion and Imagy~Jennifer
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All my lovely comments...lost in cyberspace...whaaah!!! Stupid machines...LOL... Wanda
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