She's like a flower
So beautiful,
you dare not touch her
Don't want to ruin her
She's buttoning her shirt
becuase one's come undone
She's even more perfect
with her imperfections
She's just standing ther
Just standing there,
So beautiful
A goddess to me
she should be worshiped
she seems so lonely
So quiet
Taking a peak in her mirror
she realizes her lipstick is on her teeth
She's just standing there
Just standing there, So beautiful
She doesn't know her beauty
She makes me weak in my knees
My heart, it takes
an extra beat
She glances my way and I turn away
I'm not a stalker, I am an admirer
In awe
Just standing there,
So beautiful
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Written February 15th, 2005
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this write flowed beautifully, it was a very sweet write.
the imagery and your choice of coulours was excellent, i love anything that is blue or purple
i especially loved the first four lines....
She's like a flower,
so beautiful,
you dare not touch her,
Don't want to ruin her.
they are wonderful. it think you have written an incredible piece. keep up the excellent work.
Til
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This is really sweet...I get a great sense of the awe you feel at seeing her, so perfect and unblemished in that moment. I wonder what made you think she seemed sad and lonely...was it an expression on her face, the way her head was tilted, her eyes were pointed downward, or maybe her shoulders were almost imperceptibly slumped? Great write...I really enjoyed it.
Lorena
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