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Orchestrated

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Your words
are gentle fingers
tracing fine lines
on my skin,

causing me to sigh
& tremble
under your touch ~

I am made anew
with a rapturous glance
from your shining eyes,

a breathy whisper
from your mouth...

There is Time
for Love
left in this Life
that spins
in delirious Wonder ~

I gasp at the Grandeur
you evoke
with your sudden embrace,
your intentions of Pleasure
well~defined...

Oh, what Beauty
you inspire ~

what Awe
is revealed
by this dance we do,
so easily...

There is a Symphony
so sweet
in Souls that seek
another's Heart...


    ~ February 20, 2005
          2:15 p.m.


Author notes

Whutt??? LOL

Picture credit: 'Does He Love Me?'
by John William Godward
Written February 20th, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    roflmao That would have to be buried a lot further than 6 foot under, my Friend...public school education, Sweetheart...all the way!!! But yes, I am kind of fluent in English~speaking skills, in spite of that lil' misfortune!!! Ohhh, wattle...ya cracked me up with that one, my Friend...hehehe I kind of chortled at the 'master seductress' part anyway!!! Not even...LOL...Thanks, wattle...you're alright, my Friend...hehehe ♥ Wanda

  • wattle silver member
    February 20, 2005
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    Oh my, Lady Hope. You turn heads with your words. A master seductress displaying quality and class (obviously we have a private school girl/education buried in the psychic. ) – Thank you.

  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    Thanks, JenP...a bubble bath, eh??? Hmmmm... Ok... hehehe Glad you liked it, my Friend...be well, Poet... ♥ Wanda

  • JenP
    February 20, 2005
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    Aw, that sounds so nice. Like being a warm bubble bath nice lol. Beautiful, truly and simply. Great job, Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    Thanks, Helen...{looks around a bit} Is it hot in here or what??? roflmao Thanks for coming by, my Friend...this one is gonna be fun, I think...Uhhhh ohhhh... hehehe ♥ Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    eek!!! Whatta comment, Poet!!! Oy vey...Yes, I'm quite sure you do...as does she... Oh, the hands of a Poet are holy things, I think...Thanks for visiting...LOL... ♥ Wanda

  • brown paper bag
    February 20, 2005
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    wonderful

    A wonderful poem the words so rich and sensual Wanda..Good for you.I love this write.. Helen

  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    Thanks, Angel...glad you liked it, my Friend...It's a little different for me...I've noticed a style change going on lately...It's a unique feeling, after writing for all these years...thanks for comin' by... ♥ Wanda
  • Jade Darklinmoon
    February 20, 2005
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    this is beautiful. like sitting on a park bench in april or may...listining to the birds sing in the massive tress as the world turns into a new time for recreation.
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