I don't Believe
anyone
should be
wounded
in the Making
of this Love ~
there shouldn't be
any victims,
no one
Lost
to the Cause...
There should
only be
a Sharing
of Souls ~
an exchange
of Spirit,
a Giving of
one's
Essence
as a Whole...
I can only Hope ~
I can only hold Faith
that Life
can be the Dream
I remember,
a silken smile
waking
to the Light...
~ March 6, 2005
3:05 p.m.
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Written March 6th, 2005
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Love is a such a mystery
you clearly define what i would have love to be
"There should
only be
a Sharing
of Souls ~
an exchange
of Spirit,
a Giving of
one's
Essence"
thank you for these lovely words from a true heart whom puts delicate words to feelings.
Robert
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Wearing a Silken Smile Even Now
Pain is often a misinterpretation of love. Love hurns away excess metals like the refiners fire does with silver. It's actually love in action at its deeper places that leaves no ememies. Even hate doesn't have THAT much stregth. But once the bullsit is gone from ones' attention, we walk in light and are light and love.
I treid to back to your first poems, but the AP system will not allow me to go further back than fifty pages. Guess being prolific is frowmen upon here.
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(after reading that I feel I need to sshhhh.. ~whisper~ and walk tenderly into the bedroom)
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Awww...thanks, Becca...I'm glad ya liked it, my Friend...I appreciate ya asking me about it...Hope you're havin' a great Sunday, Poet...
Wanda
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well well wanda -- thanks for sending me this link!!! it was amazing!!! i absolutely loved it!!! it was such a sweet tender poem with a hint of sadness.... beautiful. absolutely beautiful!!!!
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Indeed, Sir...
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'love can often stretch us to our limits and beyond what we can stand in pleasurable ways as well as painful, but true love always snaps back and lays down for more, wheter it be tears or joy, for it is the act of loving that turns the wheels that move the soul to limits two would never otherwise know. ~~Artis
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This is an elouqently written poem about one of the strongest emotions known to man and woman. The one emotion with both the power to make and break us. It would be nice if it didn't hurt so much at times but you know what they say about that, no pain ... no gain. What you can gain from it far outways the pain that's for sure
Sapphire
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This is beautiful! And I totally agree. Wouldn't it be nice if no one was hurt in the making of love? Unfortunately Pandora had to open that box and pain is everywhere...*sigh*. Well, like I said, nice poem
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this poem would have to be on the most applauded list as of march 7th...and looky there..i think it is!!
Jen
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Silky smooth read..just what I need! Your lovely background set the mood..your words, to me, are like soul food.
Love Ya!
♥ Maureen
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DIANE!!! How ya doin', my Friend?!? So good to see ya here...I've missed you somethin' awful!!! hehehe 
Thanks for commenting, Sweetheart...glad ya liked it, as always...thrilled to see your name come up!!! I'll just be here a few more minutes for now; gotta get ready for work...I'll be back tonight after 9 pm CST; Hope to see ya again soon!!! Wanda
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Thanks for readin', Poet...glad ya liked it... Wanda
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AMEN TO THAT.A gentle touch to my heart with such expressiveness leaves me in awe of all that is and those, like yourself who can, send it straight to the depths within, with so few words.Very powerful my friend.
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hey this was really very beautifully written, i loved it...
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Criss!!! How ya doin', Sweetheart??? So happy to see ya...Hope you're havin' a great day...I'm glad you read this one...ya went & left such a lovely comment for me...I agree with what you said, too...True Love can never die...or fade...Love you, my Friend... ♥ Wanda
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breathtaking
...it is impossible to fall out of love. Love is such a powerful emotion, that once it envelops you it does not depart. True love is eternal. If you think that you were once in love, but fell out of it, then it wasn't love you were in. There are no 'exit' signs in love, there is only an 'on' ramp...
your words are like healing balm on my fevered soul...
Waking every morning to the light ~ criss
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Hello, Michael...sure glad ya read this one...LOL...after the dark ones, I was afraid I'd scare ya or somethin'!!! hehehe I agree; if everyone felt this way, the World would be a better place...Hope we live to see it, my Friend...Thanks for comin' by, Poet... Wanda
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Outstanding
Wow, what a wonderful message in this poem with so much emotion. If all encounters were like this piece, the world would definitely be a different place. Keep up the great writing. Take care and God Bless.
Michael -
Hiya, Beautiful!!! hehehe Thanks, O Lyrical One...glad ya liked it, my Friend...Thanks for the posies, Robin...I appreciate ya, Poet... ♥ Wanda
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How beautiful Wanda! Of course, I'm not surprised since it came from your magical pen. Here's a dozen roses for the lovely Hope (shew, fingers tired now) Lovely lovely write dear one.
~Lyrical
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{sings} 'My GF's back & there's gonna be trouble...hey lah, hey lah, my GF's back!!!' hehehe Hiya, Annie my Girl!!! Wassup, Baby??? ♥ Wander
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Thanks for reading, my Friend... Wanda
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Beautiful!
Whoa, very, very pretty, very gentle, spoken of true love, Wander
I can only Hope ~
I can only hold Faith
that Life
can be the Dream
I remember,
a silken smile
waking
to the Light...
Sweetie, this is poem within itself... it's beautiful!! And yes, tell Helen it's her decision, but read the poem a second time Gorgeous!! Love ya, (your GF is BACK!!!) Ain
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eek!!! Ummm... Ohhhh, no, Helen...it's entirely your decision, my Friend!!! ♥ Wanda
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Lovely
Beautiful Wanda and so full of love and hope.You may have made a decision easier for me.Tonight... I may take my boyfriend back. Thank you for the inspiration..
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