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You're so stuck
between a rock and a hard place
Itr's just so hard to live
When there's nothing here for you
No motivation
You fear this is as good as it gets

There is no one to listen
to you complain aboutyour life
Will anyone care what you think?
Will there be anyone
to ever love you back?
You start to think it might be you

You aren't what you think you are
You're not a failure
so stop smoking your damn ciggarettes
Just let in your angel
Your too far down
to see your way out
of the hell that you have made.

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People help me finish it!!! heh.
Written March 18th, 2005

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  • shatteredprince
    March 19, 2005
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    Hello. Its been a long time since I've commented on anything you've written, but I've been having a hard time lately. Anyway, I liked this, but I didn't really understand what it was about. There was great words and a cool concept, i just didn't understand where it was going. I'll read it again when its finsihed and then I'll probably grasp it in its entirety. Great job in any case.

    the ugly one

  • Naughtygrlred gold member
    March 19, 2005
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    u r so right