Sometimes I'm vain
sometimes I cry
sometimes I wake up and scream at the sky
These are a few things you should know
before you step into my life
I'm like quicksand
I am pesemistic, masacistic
never quiet optimistic
It's the only way I have ever known
I'm a bitch to you, but honey
I am really in love with you
I'm just not sure how to show you
Chorus:
This is me X4
So deal with me
If you're looking for something perfect
I would suggest they you look elsewhere
I am up to here with problems
I am my own burden
Don't want to be yours too
Bridge:
I should really wear a warning label that reads:
Unstable, Proceed with care
I'm not used to anyone
opening any doors for me
You'll have to get used to me not taking your compliments well
I've never really cared for anyone like this
so keep giving me these reasons to care
Author notes
This si not for anyone in particular... well kind of has to do with jonathan...in a way i suppose.
Written April 7th, 2005
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Definetly sounds like a song. Very cool method of presentation I found, simplistic, but what better way to convey complexity than through a means that even the simplest dullard could comprehend. Thats me, by the way. Awesome write, very personal, and I totally know what you mean when you write something that isn't abut anyone in paticular but winds up fitting someone anyway. I always write shit and then someone'll ask me if I hate them or am plotting to have them murdered. I mean, with me, thats never a bad guess, but still, poems are better most of the time if they are just creative. Which this is. Great job, and thanks for all of the comments on my shit, did rise above the stars confuse you or something? Thats the only one you didn't really say anything to. Anyway, thanks.
the ugly one -
is this an actual song? I've never heard it but I like it. It's very creative and I can relate.
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very creative 1-10=6
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