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My original Birthday

I came home and surprised to c,every1 doing there same old thing,i dont think they know,wat today is,well i hope they die when its theres aswell.............
On this day is my original birthday,y cant any1 c that i want to b love on my original birthday,only i can c that it is when they come around that its over.......
I talk to my mum,she has no idea wat day it is,i take a walk down the park,even my friends dont even know wat day it is,i said ohwell i hope u die on urs aswell..........
Today is my original birthday so y cant u c that its my day not ur day,i hope som1 realises that its my original birthday......
Now i come to find every1 to shout,then presents on the table with every1 smileing at me,i siad nothing atall just went to the kareoke machine and sang.....
Thank u for remembering my original birthday,and im gratefull u kept it a surprise cause im happy when its my original birthday.

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Written June 18th, 2005

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  • Sonja
    June 18, 2005
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    Great done!

    Really interesting birthay. It is original and full of deeper feelings than one can see with first reading. Good luck in contest.