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signs

Finding you in my head everyday
hoping you will never go away
I like you here,
All cozy with me

Will this be just sand in an hourglass?
Counting down the final days
Or a birth of something wonderful
Ever growing hand in hand

These shooting stars
and these butterflies
signs that something is right
How can I ignore it? (Thank you Father)






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NOT DONE YET
Written August 7th, 2005

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  • shatteredprince
    August 9, 2005
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    I liked this, very cool, I'll definetly read this again when its finished.

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