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Effects of Grandeur Upon the Soul (reposted)

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I'll slide in
quietly,

beside you
in Dream's
wondrous Embrace

& softly sigh
with Intentions of Awe...

I am open
to your Warmth ~

I turn towards you
even in slumber...

There is Sacred Trust
between us
& we Know

how vivid
& full of Grace
this truly is ~

we Delight
in each other's
Presence,

Desire
each other's
Company

when we're apart ~

We stand together
in this Deluge

of Life...


    ~ March 24, 2005
        6:50 p.m.




Author notes

Picture credit: 'Ecstasy' by Maxfield Parrish

originally posted March 24, 2005

www.allpoetry.com/poem/1143105
Written August 19th, 2005

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  • mjseattle silver member
    October 19, 2006
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    Very nice, Dear. I can't wait to lie next to you and look in your eyes.

  • Providence
    August 19, 2005
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    "we Delight
    in each other's
    Presence,

    Desire
    each other's
    Company

    when we're apart ~

    We stand together
    in this Deluge

    of Life..."

    wonderful...Standing together even when your apart...ah now that is love!

  • kllaw4
    August 19, 2005
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    I really enjoyed reading this piece , I was great I felt youe emotion ... Kelly
  • sexkitty69
    August 19, 2005
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    wow what a beautiful piece so full of character love the write keep up the great work alot of passion well keep it up

  • Theater Of Dreams
    August 19, 2005
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    Enchanting...passionate...

    Oh my...Passion's Flame Ignito! But always tempered by Grace...how soft, endearing and precious. Thank you for reprising this. It is...VERY deeply personal...and soooo full of love...I can only DREAM of such a State of Mind and Soul...
    Beautiful indeed.
    Edited on Aug 19, 9:00 p.m. because 'Spelling error.'.
  • Holliex
    August 19, 2005
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    great

    very emotional and powerfull poem. beautifully written. i like it alot.
  • Vampiric Kisses
    August 19, 2005
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    This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. Makes me want to cry. But it's beautiful.

  • Night Hope gold member
    August 19, 2005
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    Thanks, suse...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Annie loved this one, too... Wander

  • suseann gold member
    August 19, 2005
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    I am touched by the last verse the most.Very emotional powerful.
    You are moving up to another level in your writes Wanda,I can see and feel it in your works.~~`Suseann

  • Night Hope gold member
    August 19, 2005
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    Thank you...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • DylanThomas
    August 19, 2005
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    WONDERFULLY written...smooth..makes me smile....
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