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Rubber Ducky!

Bright rubber ducky
Floating with no care at all
Obnoxious noises

Silly old ducky
Making my life so carefree
The greatest childhood

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I have no clue what I just wrote!
Written September 4th, 2005

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  • Flipsidebabee
    September 6, 2005
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    Thank you so much. That means a boo koo much to me!
  • Capital
    September 6, 2005
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    care free- the greatest childhood, well said!