When i awoke in the night
All the stars were trying to sleep
And the moon was feeling alone
Suddenly a star broken
Some parts of that star come towards the earth;
Amazing i saw a beutiful flower
Who was saying to the star,
O' broken star it's true
that i have short life span
But everybody praise me;
You have no identity in millions of stars
Now you are on the earth alone
So let's be friends to each other;
Suddenly flower becomes sad
Alas i will die-on the next day
I can't live longer with you
Next day flower becomes fade
And the broken star still broken and alone;
waqar F/O Medicine Jamia Hamdard
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Written September 27th, 2005
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Thank you so much for the comment anna3. I'm so glad you liked it.I find you to be a truly lovely girl yourself.take care anna3.
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great
Very nice write I enjoyed a lot this picture of words, good luck, anna -
Thanks a lot shadylas 4 comment.i really appreciate you.
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Lovely poem. Nicely done.
~Amanda~
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