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The Defenders Choice

A young kit,
thrown into manhood.
Dreams met,
nearly torn.
Leaving family behind,
he approaches the academy in joy.
For he is to become what all youth dream,
A fox of courage and honor.
Triumphs won, battles lost.
Will prevail bring an end?
Questions asked,
paths shown.
The defenders choice,
his own.

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Written off of a story my Mate is in the process of writing.
Written September 28th, 2005

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  • M-Nightshade
    December 3, 2005
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    i miss you my friend...i have attemted to call but no answer...email me at M_Nightshade2000@yahoo.com so we can talk about what has passed and what has yet to come...Magdelena AKA Aimee