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La vie

La vie est une comédie d'amour
Une chantage affectif, une parodie d'amour
Une catastrophe intertrompu d'amour
Un analogie ambigu, oblique.

La vie est une force majeur d'amour
La vie est une comédie d'amour
La vie est une abadonne pretextieux d'amour
Le tragedie suprème d'amour.

Revelent par hazard la raillerie
Le tragédie comique de la vie
La vie est une comédie d'amour
Silence enterrait en mocquerie.

Pauvres acteurs cherchant l'empathie
Choissant la comédie ou le tragédie
Le pasquinade finale d'amour.
La vie est une comédie d'amour.

TRANSLATION

Life is a comedy of love,
A crowning parady of love:
Interrupted catastrophe,
An ambiguous analogy.

Life is major force of love.
Life is a comedy of love.
A pretentious desert of love,
The crowning parady of love.

Revolving accidentally
The tragic comedy of life.
Life is a comedy of love,
Silence buried in mockery.

Poor players seeking empathy
Chose comedy or tragedy,
The pasquinade of love.
Life is a comedy of love.

Author notes

Cet poéme est un quatern.

This poem is a quatern.
Written October 3rd, 2005

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  • x x
    May 18, 2007
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    Heh... this is absolutely wonderful...
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    La vie est une comédie d'amour
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    I think I've found my new motto
    All the best
    Z

  • TaleAsOldAsTime
    April 11, 2006
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    this is a great poem i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest

    elizabeth aka black rose

  • mamad gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    You're right. Thanks for catching that. I do know better. Typo?
    Thanks again for comments.

  • Mephitic ID Synergy gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    Sort of the 'life is but a stage' thing, eh? I love French. I wish I understood more than 60% of this! lol!

    Naturally, life is a comedy of love - having a positive, satisfying resolution. To twist love to other uses is to make life a parody or a tragedy...

    Did you mean "Pauvres acteurs' in Stanza 4? The only other thing close to Pouvres I can think of is 'pouvoir', which doesn't really make sense.

    That's all I've got.

    Mike