An angel has a broken wing and cannot fly.
She limps alone on the ground below
Remembering how she once traveled the sky,
Dreaming of the places she used to go.
The people she used to bless with tenderness and love
Miss her terribly and pray for her wing to heal,
Hoping one day soon she'd be able to soar once again above
The storm clouds of despair and anguished ordeal.
Laying down, hurting and afraid, she rests her head.
Tears of joy and comfort begin to fall upon her face.
Feeling the love and prayers being spread,
Her soul is filled with reassurance and grace.
Author notes
For Susan who is fighting cancer for the second time and is currently in the hospital with an infection. Her AP friends miss her.
Written October 6th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- For Our Beloved Blushfulmoon by Willow.
300 points, ended November 8, 2005, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautifully magnificent
Beautiful words and I love the emotions behind this piece of art....
Definitely inspiring and one cannot help but smile
at this one
Awesome!!!
Best wishes to you in the contest~
and much love~
Desire
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Laying down, hurting and afraid, she rests her head.
Tears of joy and comfort begin to fall upon her face.
Feeling the love and prayers being spread,
Her soul is filled with reassurance and grace.
Now out of the entire poem, I truly think that the last four lines of this in your piece is truly inspiring, I have no doubt that she will get better and sometimes reading the hope in other people gives you all the more strength to fight it, I think that is what you gave Susan here... this is great, Thank you so much for entering ... Best Wishes in this contest and in life, Take Care 
Sara
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what a beautiful and touching poem for a beautiful and loving person. Im sure she apreciates this very much. she is such a sweetheart and wonderful friend. It is nice to see people lifting her up where she belongs
p.s. have missed you as well hope you are doing good!
huggles
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Your poem is pure magic. I read Susan's comment, although without it I knew she would love it. I have no doubts about the heal property that prayers have. Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck to you.
s and ♥
Willow -
OH...this is so loving...Beautiful words...so tenderly written for such a fragile beauty. I so love it. Best in the contest, but more than that, I am sure this is going to bless Susan.
Sam
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With all the poems, contests and comments for you, I'm honored you took time to read mine. Thank you. So glad you are home.
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excellent~
Oh this is beautiful sweetie
Thank you for writing this and entering the contest
Your love and friendshp mean a lot to me as you know
Best of luck in the contest....
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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Very nicely done!
Lovely poem for Susan! She is missed so much..hope she'll soon be in touch with all of us again.
♥ Maureen
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