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Fakers!

Here we are in a place of our own making.
You built the foundations upon my faking
That’s right; faking!
Fake for the faking
I faked
While you lay awake
I cheated
When you felt defeated
I lied
While you really tried

Because I’m a fake
In the place that we made
You made
Rather
Built upon a fake
In disguise as
The bride
You’d always dreamed of
While I dreamed of nothing
And you
You didn’t have a clue
Did you?

That I’m a fake
By your side
Ambushed from within!
I’m a fake
The lover you call your kin!
I’m awake
And thinking this
Lover’s leap; go on blind into the abyss.
While you sleep
And your heart is filled to the brim
Loving his fake who is as real as him.

Author notes

It's a bit weird tell me what you think i am always open to criticism! Sarah
Written October 10th, 2005

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