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Rose

fragrant blood red bloom
symbolic romance blossom
amidst thorny stems

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Written October 11th, 2005

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    A is definitely a true meaning of love. You have it's beauty and the thorns make you realize the reality of it all.


    Ted E

  • Grandia
    October 28, 2005
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    Only 3 stanzas, yet authentic. I like it!

  • skittles gemini
    October 21, 2005
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    nice work

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    A rose, is a rose, is a rose - this was well done, you have woven words to create a very beautiful image.

  • Touchof1der gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    In every romantic encounter we come across a few thorns don't we. But it's how we react to those thorns and whether we perceive them as a threat or not that counts. You did a wonderful job here and I enjoyed this immensely.
    ♥ Touchof1der
    Edited on Oct 12, 2:44 because ''.

  • jenelda silver member
    October 11, 2005
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    Terrific Mia, a great haiku, ahh the rose..a lovely flower

    Jenni

  • grannyeri gold member
    October 11, 2005
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    An accurate description of a rose in haiku form.
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