It's in me, I feel it flowing just like my blood...
I want to sleep for a long time covered in mud,
Pumping & pulsing through each one of my veins,
This Hate consumes me like a big awful pain!
My thoughts go quickly to one slice of the wrist,
Would it be that easy to end all of this?
I'm trying my hardest to find a release,
Can you help me, love me... PLEASE?!
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Dunno what this was, just soemthing that came to me while crying in the shower.
Written November 10th, 2005
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Thanks, you're such a big sweety! Things are ok if I just keep on moving forward. best wishes always
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This is a sad but beautiful write god I wish I could just hug ya after reading this from you. I hope things work out for the best with you my friend.
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This is a very sad, but lovely poem. Isn't it strange how our poetic thoughts come to us in the strangest places? I do hope you have found the inner peace to help you though the hard times. Beautifully written.
Stay Beautiful,
~C.J.~
P.S. Thank you for your comment on "Say Something", but I must let you know that I have not said anything to him, might not either. It's complicated. -
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lovely most adiquet indeed, you should look into what angers you and logically deduce the problem, it helps... sorry any way, a well rounded and rhyming peace. well put. -
Wow this was an awesome little write I am shore many can realate to this piece but you wrote it and done it perfect.
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I feel where you are comming from. At times all seems to be at a stand still, a dark corner in life. Thank you for sharring this ~Bret~
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Thank you for your comment on my poem! I loved this poem because I can relate to it so well. Your emotions come through very strong in this.
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Its always good to let out your emotions through poetry. Well done. Keep on writing.
Blessed be,
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aww...ubber sad babe!! but a good write!! keep it up sweetie! and hope things get better! if you ever need a friend to talk to im her for ya babe! even tho i dont know u lol....well take care <3--Jana--xx
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This was a very sad poem not sure what had you crying in the shower but I hope that things got better if not then i hoe they get better this was a really good poem and I am glad you got how you felt out like this and not with the knife thanks for taking the time to look at one of my poems that means a lot this was a wonderful lots of love Robin...aka SH
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