I thought about it
There is nothing I want from you
I thought about it again
And there is
I want you to feel loved
I want to know you feel loved
Nothing more
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Speaks for itself
Written December 20th, 2005
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a very sincere heart i feel , beautifull write , short and to the point
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This is short, but really descriptive, and upbeat, and I enjoyed it. It makes me feel like, I can love, and now be afraid to give all my love. Good write!
Laura -
Actually it was inspired by a 12 year old girl. I had given her 12 roses with 12 words that described her character on her 12th birthday. In a thank you note she said that I made her feel loved. I told her that's all I needed to know. The poem applies to her mom and others too.
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Lovely poem..when we truly love someone, all we want is for them to feel loved, nothing more. Very nicely expressed!
Maureen
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excellent~
Great poem hun
Ummm wonder if I know of this person who you are speaking of in particular......we haven't chatted on the phone in some time
I miss our talks and hope all is well with you...
Short....honest....and loving..
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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Well ..well..well...what a great simplicity of love is narated where eveeryone could easily be relating it with himself/herslf too through and through.The thoughts are very deeply touching the essence of the eternity again and again.The beauty of the write lies in its thought design which is very universal and very beautifully expressed too.The subject of the poem is presented very softly and in a very melodious way.The music of the love is being played back in each word here in this write too.The size of the poem is very small but the impact is very big and very targeted one.The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too.I really appreciate this work.prabhudayl khattar
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this is a very sweet poem, its short and sweet but you can still feel all the love you have for that person great job
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good
Simple but says so much....I wonderful message your getting across. I think you did an excellent job! -
When you truly love someone, you want them to always be loved and happy. Even if its not with you. Great job. Keep on writing.
blessed be,
LeFay -
Short, indeed with a simple message. Turning the other cheek here. To love enough not to love.............nice poem though, really nice.
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Short and to the point. A very loving poem showing how much you put the one you love first. I salute your heart.
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