Everyday I sit & wait for some kind of contact,
For you to say you're coming to visit.
But I guess Today is not the day,
Why is there a wall that blocks me from you?
I'm having trouble trying to fully understand,
This is crazy, cos' we are a family.
There's nothing I want more than for me to see,
All the people who should play a big part of me!
We used to have such a close loving friendship,
But maybe that was just me, so wrong.
Is it so hard to love & feel a little more?
We wish we could all be part of your life again,
It hurts to know our names & thoughts are ignored.
We are so deprived of seeing the ones we love,
Our Family, all those we once adored.
Nothing left now but some happy memories,
photos of strangers still hanging on my wall...
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Not really a poem, More like thoughts and feeling written on paper...
Written December 28th, 2005
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its good
hey i like it
the ony thing is...
its sad coz i think i no who it bout
bout its good i like it -
Best Wishes to you as well!
Wow... well like you tell me, you keep writing and let those emotions flow! Its such a healthy outylet and sometimes I feel that writing is the only thing that keeps me sane anymore. I hope all is well with you and that you keep in touch
If ever you want to talk I am just an IM away 
Sara 
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I understand this so clearly...because of strayed relationships ...that myself have gone through.
tis sad when when some won't open their hearts and simply forgive!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
Bravo!
Very poignant and touching. You can feel the anguish in this fine poem. Excellent. Bravo! -
Thanks for the hint! Frustration is an understatement, but yes... u read it well! best wishes always
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you need to change the word your to you're. That's the only thing I saw that needed fixing, otherwise it's a nice write. I felt sadness and frustration. Good job,
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