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B
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Demonic and deranged.
Showing my uglyness and craziness.
Showing my hatred and pain
My hair...
Runs wild and free
My lips...
Tainted blood red
My eyes...
Dark and penetrating
My skin...
Pale and transparent
My body
Reflects all of these imperfections
People stare with unkind eyes
J
U
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G
I
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Me by my outside appearence
Without glancing within me
They laugh
They talk behind my back
Because I don't fit their 'perfect' image
My beauty...
Hides underneath my black clothes
My beauty...
Hides underneath this black heart
My beauty...
Hides away from this
C
R
U
E
L
World
†
Author notes
This is my first challenge poem.
Written July 23rd, 2002
A contest entry
- Write a poem about your own beauty. No less than 40 lines. by isa.
80 points, ended October 8, 2002, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Why on earth would you wantto delete all this incredible work??
It really is an instense experience, reading something truely amazing and heartfelt.
Blessings,
Vikki xxxx -
I like this style, there is a lot of emotion in this as well as the hope of hiding it from the world.
I enjoyed this piece, it shows thoughts I have had myself from time to time.
nicely done.
Andrew -
Thanks. I forgot I had this. When I deleted all of my poetry, I was hoping EVERYTHING was gone, lol. Oh well! Thank you for reading.
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hmm. not bad at all. it kind of describes to me as what i see as a gothic person. but thats what i see from the imagry you provide here. good job with the writing.
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oooooh. this is aweosme. I knwo what you mean by hiding behind blackness.... this is a very suckey world, but it is one we have to live in......
Rock on
cHeLsEa -
wow thats really good Jennae(Did i spell that right??)not even wow cuz all your poems r good, oh well
wikked poem mistress
~*Nightmare Material*~ -
wow this is verry deep but it is a awsome write
liz
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