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Tears



Fall on my face

Let the memories never waver

Too slow

Too rapid

    Too many  

        To count.

One drips

Another drops

Until I have a puddle beneath me

Emotion written on my face

Distorted and skewed

Never fitting just right.

Try my Patience

 Slowly run

Down my face

  Into my mouth

An ocean develops

I can taste it

And I can smell it.

Salty

and Warm

Stained face of black

And these are the memories that I have?

Just another smear

Upon my face

Drip...

  ...Drop

Fall on my face






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Written January 26th, 2006

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  • blondefairy777
    January 26, 2006
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    Sounds pretty sad. It's good. very coulmnly. like a stick or something like that.
  • Dixie
    January 26, 2006
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    emotional and well written

    So sad and painful, your sadness fills the page