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There's Supposed To Be A Title Here Or Something...

I've walked these empty streets
Bleeding all the way
Won't you bleed with me?
I've read between the lines
Trying to find the meaning
Do I take the time to cry
Or should I walk away
like every fucking time?

I..
I..
I...
I don't know what to do!
I would go and cry
But I used to do that all the fucking time
Maybe I should go and find a new hardcore line
But there's no time
So we're stuck with the same old rhyme

Maybe I'll be myself
And let out all these emotions
But I never wanted this
I don't know what to do with myself
I'm such a mess
And feeling so forever depressed
Hopefully I can save myself..

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Written January 30th, 2006

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  • something vague
    February 5, 2006
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    i loved the way you used the "i..i..i.." it shows such a hopelessness and restlessness...i loved it. there's so much emotion in this poem, you did a beautiful job putting it all into your words. a beautiful poem, very nice job.