Shallow hopes... road to life is ever bending
Once upon a time... love was never ending...
Remember when we sailed across the shore
Just to find the heavens same as before...
It was the time... World was young and bright
How come we never dreamed of the night...?
Not knowing where joys shall finally lead
After having it all... we still didn't succeed....
Once upon a life... the path was so green
We never thought about things we hadn’t seen...
Once upon a life... once upon a dream...
Before I lost my track... wisdom didn’t deem...
But still.... still the tide calls my name...
Once upon a truth... towards the far off fame...
Once upon a time… for a lifetime I waited…
Just to find… This world is overrated…
Over the mighty waters the night now shall fly
Below, it is just me... so grateful to die....
~*~
Author notes
this was the last one i wrote in last few months that I have spent away from allpoetry... Will try to write some new ones now 
Written January 31st, 2006
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Okay, so I've got work to do now! =( I am bookmarking this as well. I will read it as soon as I get back home!
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This was a wonderful write! I, too, have been stale... and still am, I'm afraid.
But I'm glad to see you come back with such wonderful force! Beautiful! Keep writing...
Kate
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what can I say?
wow!, it's been quite some time, I very much liked the flow of this piece. It was very smooth to read -
you're back to your normal mode
mina
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