If roses grow in heaven
God plzz pick a bunch for me
Place them in friend's arm
And tell her they're from me.
Tell her i like her and miss her
When she turns to smile
Place a pearl between her lips
And hold her for a while
Though my words are few
But my heart is true
God replied in ice cold silence
The first time i saw her face
I saw the sun rise in her eyes
Smiles like the moonlight in the murky night
Never be lonely be always together
Your love shimmers in the night sky
Dr Waqar F/O Medicine
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Written February 2nd, 2006
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This poem is so sweet... It really is a good poem i haaven't read anything like it... It is one of a kind poem... i think
-Pruellen
AKA - C.C.
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breathtaking
Hey there, I haven't talked to you in awhile, this is a very good poem, very heartfelt...I love romantic poems...This one was no exception, I really like it...well, I have two recent poems up, hope you will comment them and tell me what you think...ttyl...Tobi -
Thanks man. It’s honored to hear that from you
You should be plucky for the idea of love.
And I’m so sorry to respond that late. I’ve been so busy these days and wish the day was more than 24 hours!! Hehe.
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rampion
M glad to read ur comment after such a long time,Your pen still flows with magical words.thank u so much for comment.i'm in love with a girl who don,t know abt.me.that i like her or not. -
Afarin
Oh it was so deep to say anything..what a great love poetry..” God plzz pick a bunch for me/Place them in friend's arm/And tell her they're from me.”
To me it was all pure love are flowing from your heart..I’m so glad to had this chance to read and comment on it.
Thanks for sharing this with us
~Massy~
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Not a fan of text speak but enjoyed the ideas relayed here. I'm not sure but, I was thinking this was about looking down from heaven and then the bit about God didn't fit, so I will have ponder this a bit before a critical review can be given.
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Brief and to the point.
A little confusing but a very sweet poem of your love.
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