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~ Eternal Wound


Gone so far by the heartless autumn wind
Carried away by the fierce tide of life
Joys that belonged to me so long, long ago
Are fearlessly stolen by the endless strife

For about seventy eternal days
I lived in a maze with no possible end
Naked and silent in the coal black
For once forsaken... I had no friend

Blamed for something I never imagined
Taken away by misery I had not known
Even my loved ones just turned away
To leave me so broken and so alone

That was the time my God was there
Giving the defense from the baseless lies
A proof less victim I lived in nothingness
Barely hiding face from world's cruel eyes

Yet I survived the killing wounds of life
I waited till the world trusted me again
Now I can feel blessed, and smile once more
Forgetting for a while, this never ending pain


~*~

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Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • Lostariel gold member
    November 30

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    I love the title of this poem and the entire poem as well. I am so going to recomment your poetry to my favorites! You deserve to be read!!!!


  • killa camm23
    February 10, 2006
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    Whoa this write almost had me in tears...I loved it...It was soo close to what I was feeling I had to take a deep breath after I was reading it. Damn this is by far one of the best I've read in a while...